When Derpy Hooves accidentally sends herself and three other ponies to alternate universes, they have to face a long and emotional journey to get back to the universe they need to get back to.
(Chapter 5 and chapter 6 edited by X4v13R009)
"In the world of words, the imagination is one of the forces of nature." - Wallace Stevens
When Derpy Hooves accidentally sends herself and three other ponies to alternate universes, they have to face a long and emotional journey to get back to the universe they need to get back to.
(Chapter 5 and chapter 6 edited by X4v13R009)
Nice! Overall, apart from some grammatical errors and some quickly covered plot holes, this is great!
Also, uh, need an editor?
;3
That is a really funny story. I love the different universes !
See you :)