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Hearths Warming with Lyra has always been interesting for Bon bon... interesting occasionally being a placeholder for aggravating.

Just a short slice of life story that mixes elements of Christmas with Hearths Warming.

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KillerRobotQuote

KillerRobotQuote #1 · Dec 27th, 2014 · · ·

Friendly reminder: In the title, "your" should be "you're," the contraction of "you are."

RageLokiCat

RageLokiCat #2 · Dec 27th, 2014 · · ·

Congratulations! Your story gets my first read, comment, and like as a member! Anyway, cool story. There were a few apostrophe issues, but nothing too bad. My reviews are usually better, but I've got a headache, so this is what you get for now. Nice job!

cheezesauce

cheezesauce #3 · Dec 28th, 2014 · · ·

I feel that it's a bit long-winded, especially that first paragraph. It's a huge wall of text. Still, I think there are some fairly good moments, and the premise is alright. It's just that everything can and should be said in far less.

Patronum2000

Patronum2000 #4 · Mar 3rd, 2016 · · ·

(insert interpretation of relationship here)

It's nice that you let people choose as it doesn't impact the story
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... but we all know that they're just the best of friends.
Friends, nothing more nothing less, friends.
Friends! Friends! Friends!