Several months after the events of Rainbow Rocks, the Dazzlings return with a plan to tear apart the group of girls responsible for the destruction of their gems.
But the Dazzlings aren't the only ones with a plan, as the humane 6 hope to reform the trio before they do something everyone may regret. But the girls may get more than they bargained for as they learn the circumstances of the sirens lives, and the rift that they only helped widen.
This story also involves a spit contest sub plot, and if that doesn't entice you I don't know what will.
Rated T, just in case.
Chapters (7)
interesting
I like it so far
I hope to see the continuation
I feel the loss of Dazzlings.
reminds me of some girl "demon"
but still, not okay to hurt others
very good chapter
I look forward to that happening
this very interesting
seriously I want to see where all this
I hope that Dazzlings serious change
I'm excited to know what will happen next
i liked the chapter
then, each of the dazzlings spend time with two of the rainbooms?
i hope to see the next chapter soon
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very good chapter
I liked
I hope Aria finds okay, and can get along with rainbow and applejack
adagio is the last, then that would leave her with sunset and rarity right?
that good that I could read some of this history
especially today, it's my birthday
I think Aria is an interesting character, even though some may not agree. I hope to see some character development in a positive way, but negative character regression would be cool too.
What I'm saying is...I really enjoy this story.
6350415 I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Happy Birthday by the way. You pretty much hit the nail on the head with what I'm doing. I'm hoping that people will like what I'm going to do with Adagio.
6351842 Thanks, it means a lot
I can not wait to see that chapter
I hope everything goes okay
Please continue i like how you are developing it :D
Mmmmh Adagio's backstory sounds interesting...mmmmh
Can't wait to see how it continues
I liked the chapter
Good to have you back
But... what which meant adagio with "Beautiful tension"? and with "She's an outsider just like us"?
6893051 I like to see Adagio as someone who indulges in the misery of others, so her saying "Beautiful tension" is just a way of expressing how much she enjoys causing disruptions in peoples friendships. In regards to "She's an outsider just like us" I can't really say anything about that without giving away Adagio's plan, sorry. Thanks for showing interest.
6894758 I do understand
thank you for explaining to me
I hope everything is resolved at the end
Mmmmh I wonder what Adagio's plan is.
What have commas ever done to you?
You're missing a lot of commas, especially at the end of quotations. You're even missing some periods at the end of the quotes. Here:
should be
while
should be
and so on.