In the near future of Equestria, scientists have finally developed the technology to turn dreams into reality; perfect weddings, technology, true love, ect. Everything was perfect, until the fateful day when the nightmares came to life; stabbings, shootings, robberies, etc. The nightmares were too powerful to stop,enough to possess their hosts and turn them into living creatures that feast off of the fear other living ponies; Akumus. To prevent the Akumus from spreading further, Canterlot created a special task force ward to off the Akumus. Now with fully recruited rookies, it's up them to save the future of Canterlot from turning to into a living nightmare.
Quick FYI: you put a space after things like a semicolon and a comma.
5434135 Oh sorry!Must have forgotten,I'll get that fixed right away!
The spacebar is your friend...
And it's fixed! ^w^ Sorry again for the error, but thanks for pointing that out to me! :)
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Erm, sorry; I could have sworn it wasn't that way before, but you need to have spaces after things like exclamation marks and periods.
5434659 And it's fixed! ^w^ Thank you again for pointing that out!