Every memory a string. Every day a memory. The sweet mare Marionette cherishes each and every one. But how many memories can one mare have before she is bound by her own strings?
Every memory a string. Every day a memory. The sweet mare Marionette cherishes each and every one. But how many memories can one mare have before she is bound by her own strings?
You've already mentioned it in deviantART's #Bronies that you're going to find an editor, and aside from needing a little TLC, this isn't bad at all. Just make sure you find someone who'll be thorough enough to point out any redundancies like that part regarding the snow I mentioned in the chat.
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I'll be sure to, though I am not sure how to go about looking and asking for an editor. I am looking at the groups and stuff on here.
I enjoyed that.. And seriously i expected her to scare of rose and pounce on flowers devouring them.. but.. .. but that.. that was so much better.