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Crushes And Enemies

A new colt comes to school and Diamond tiara falls head over heels in love with him but he develops a crush for Apple bloom and he trys to get closer to her but sadly Apple bloom isn't as interested as he is, Diamond tiara is angered by this and she will do anything to get the colt of her dreams.

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deadpansnarker

deadpansnarker #1 · Nov 30th, 2014 · · · Last day of summer ·

Actually, I think this story would be funnier if DT was the one the colt had the crush on, but her haughtiness stopped her from even considering him because 'he's just not posh enough'. Doesn't stop him from mercilessly pursuing her, though. Then, you could have Apple Bloom being the one who is jealous "Why is Miss Prissy the one he's interested in, tain't fair" and perhaps asks Silver Spoon for some advice on how to behave like DT. In fact I might release a fic along those lines one day... If I didn't have a terminal case of bone idleness...

NoodleBrony

NoodleBrony #2 · Nov 30th, 2014 · · · Last day of summer ·

5329091 I like the idea you have but I I'm already have way through the next chapter and i don't really want to delete the whole story i have for something new but I might add the idea you have for another story in the future. ^_^ thanks for the suggestion

Asashi - Dark Fist Inari

Asashi - Dark Fist Inari #3 · Dec 2nd, 2014 · · · Last day of summer ·

You have GOT to work on that grammar man, it's terrible not too mention your not capitalizing words that need to be. All in all I know why you have a LOT more negative than you do positive.