Sunset Shimmer thinks Adagio Dazzle is, shall we say, really hot. But Adagio has no interest in friendship or redemption. Fortunately, though, Sunset has figured out what she does enjoy: Being adored.
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Great chapter! But that outfit makes that woman look as if she were cosplaying as a strawberry.
Precisely, she's done this for ages, she knows precisely what she's doing. Very much like Discord, she could probably wrap someone around her finger even without her magic or singing..
Considering that they can be just as dangerous as you, not surprised. Also, pretty sure favorite it without a U, or is this a case of British spelling vs American spelling?
If this were anyone else, I'd yell NEEERD, but, this is incredibly cool.
Hard to believe this is the same manipulative mastermind that nearly took over the school and could have taken over the world from Rainbow Rocks. My how times have changed, eh Adagio?
This is what I like about your Adagio, it's like she's aware of certain tropes that would accompany this kind of fic, and avoids them, no Tsundereness, no "Do I like her or not?", no moping about the past, while she does miss her past, she doesn't dwell on it, to quote Let It Go "The past is in the past"
Oh?
Ladies and gentlemen, we had Twilight Snarkle, now we have Sunset Snarker!
Not really, OK, most do, but Nightmare Moon just wanted to be loved, and Discord, well, some people just want to watch the world burn.
SunsEt. And it kinda is.
I see. Now THIS feels more like the Adagio we know.
You and Discord would have a wonderful chat. If not for the fact that he'd have no interest in you and even all 3 of you at full power probably wouldn't do much against the Lord of Chaos and Master of Trolling.
And I really like where this is going. That's what fun about this fic, it's not just a clopfic, it has it's own story, the clop is just the result of it, rather than the story being an excuse for the clop.
She certainly has the hips for it.
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Haha! I can't unsee that now.
who doesn't want to see bad sunset?
*reaction to first chapter*
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*reaction to reading last few chapters*
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This is... this is...!!! Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrfect
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It's a case of American vs the-rest-of-the-English-speaking-world spelling.
"..and pressed the button to hold the doors open.", maybe?
5961344
How soon?
Also, I would have loved to hear all what Adagio had to say about the creatures of the ocean. Maybe a comment on how the little fishes that eat parasites help the bigger fishes like the sharks, or how oysters don't make pearls out of grains of sand, but rather out of parasites or other things that grow on them, like our noses make boogers out of foreign objects.
5961367
Yeah, that's British spelling.
Thanks. I like to try and present something new, rather than just run by the usual checkpoints of a shipping tale. Hopefully the conflict is evident now, though.
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Silly people.
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Fair enough.
Yeah, like I said, it's refreshing to see a ship/clopfic that does acknowledge and lampshade some of the common elements, and even plays some straight, it does avert a lot of the often seen and frankly, rather tedious plot points that tend to pop up, whether the author is aware of it or not. This is a nice fic.
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Thanks ... I think.
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Cheers!
5961896
Fixed!
And I feel like there's a limit of how much geekery you can put in a story before it starts to overwhelm the action and emotional arc. With the bit on electroreception AND this discussion of amoral philosophy, I'm already pushing it.
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Oh ... and maybe three or four days?
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I still think that you could have pulled it off. It would have proven that Adagio can turn a mildly interesting subject into something that you could listen for hours.
Meh, suppose I'll have to console myself with the knowledge that some interesting clop (is it even clop when they're human?) is on its way.
I take issue with Adagio's list. She said "people, ponies, sirens...". I would think that "people" does not solely refer to humans, and one such as Adagio would not make such a remark. The other normal humans? Sure. It's part of that natural human arrogance that get's glossed over because it's cultural, so no one really takes notice. Adagio was not originally human. So rather then "people", she should have said "humans".
That said, this was a cute chapter. Good job.
Interesting turn at the end. Sometimes I wonder if Adagio herself is actually (becoming?) as confused as she makes Sunset at times. These story dev chapters have been good stuff.
That said though, regarding the next:
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Edit: That elevator button, tho...
And that author's note. I do believe I could make that happen.
“I guess now we have no plans for world domination, we can relax and just … enjoy ourselves.” I believe this so much it hurts because I have suspicions that something awry will come up and the element bearers will get nosy and drive Sunset away for a little bit
thank you for not pile-driving trivia into us for the sake of having a full conversation scene, I really appreciate that (plus it makes the parts you do write out so much clearer)
I like the idea of Adagio clinging to power for the sake of doing it, the way she just riles up Sunset is methodical and well-done. that end is super sexy
Oh boy....
You're right Adagio would look good in that dress.
Hey there it is. I found some Nietzsche in my pronz. Nice.