Sunset Shimmer thinks Adagio Dazzle is, shall we say, really hot. But Adagio has no interest in friendship or redemption. Fortunately, though, Sunset has figured out what she does enjoy: Being adored.
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Now
You fed up.
I don't think you comprehend how awesome that would be, as in, too much awesome for any brony to handle without their head blowing up. Also, I doubt Adagio will ever be able to qualify as "Good" on any end of the spectrum, be it Chaotic, Neutral or Lawful, Chaotic Neutral, sure, but good? I REALLY doubt it.
Here I am, looking at the front page of the website, and I see... Sunset and Adagio... both in lingerie...
Okay then...
Okay, this is getting weird - every so often I come back to re-read this story, and for the past three chapters you've posted an update literally a day after I re-read the whole thing
I don't know whether I'm the psychic one or whether you are!
Anyways, I do really love this story with both the drama and the more mature scenes. It's such an interesting read and I really feel for Sunset, and I even feel a little bit for Adagio too.
Rainbow is a real bch though. But it feels natural and in character for what we've seen with the Equestria Girls Rainbow. Everyone else is in-character too and I almost can't wait for the next chapter!
Take your time though Creative genius can't be rushed
I was thinking to myself as my computer was starting up here at work this morning that I'd really love to see a new chapter of this today. And then, yes.
I keep saying it, but I enjoy the slow take here on the two of them making progress. Looking forward to seeing where this is going, and I appreciate your approach with the timeline for the upcoming arc.
(and if you're up for correction feedback, there was one instance of "looks" which should be past tense)
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Great chapter! Looking forward to the next.
Rainbow Dash should get knocked down a peg or two. Preferably by AJ.
(or if this was a 'dirtier' fic, then it'd be Adagio ifyouknowwhatImean :p)
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Nah, anti-hero Dazzle all the way.
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Inorite. Isn't it awesome?
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Now that's some pretty weird synchronicity right there. Anyway, thanks for the support!
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Cheers!
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I think we're naturally tending towards some psychological realism, which I didn't plan initially. I might one day do a non-canon bonus chapter of something like that, but we'll see.
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That's what I'm saying.
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Such a non-canon bonus chapter would be amazing. Here's hoping.
This is a really great fic
Well...can I just say that this version of Rainbow really needs to get her head out of her ass? Honestly, for this worlds Element of Loyalty she is doing an absolutely shit job of being a loyal friend to Sunset and saying the things she is about Adagio and Sunset right in front of the girl. I would say that Rarity and Fluttershy were the only smart ones here even, what with AJ and Pinkie both going all "Ra, ra, reformation." right in front of a prideful girl that they took down at her highest point. What kind of reaction did they expect other than her reaction to their comments?
I can understand that with how Sunset got all reformed and such that they might assume Adagio did too, but to just outright say things like that in her presence so soon after the event? Incredibly stupid. Though I wonder how much the group actually cares about "reformed" baddies when they keep slipping about Sunset's past. I mean come on, that joke got way too fast. Why can't they just be happy that Sunset found love and that it isn't a super-toxic relationship or anything? (Totally not spoken from seeing some irl friends in a really inconsistent relationship that shouldn't have ever worked out for as long as it did and still ends up being brought up months after the relationship ended.)
Either way I look forward to what comes next- hopefully with Sunset standing up for herself and Adagio and telling off Rainbow, especially. Talk about being a doormat in this story for the most part.
Heh, I just had an idea. What if Sunset were to drop a hint at her friends about her and Adagio's "sexy times," but the girls take it the wrong way and think she's being abused. Hot damn, that'd be quite the plot.
*ahem*
I think it should be either: "It ended simply with the arranging of a second meeting" or "It ended simply with them arranging a second meeting".
I feel it should be "Don't ask me to choose."
Like someone else mentioned, that should be "looked".
Is this one of those second person things now?
"As she was walking away," , "As she walked away,"?
"looked"...
Feels. Everything feels right.
*ahem*
“Couldn't allow yourself to show any respect to the leader of the enemy, hm?” this is Adagio's inner demon; good for her being able to recite their first meeting all innocently, it's quite impressive
I feel badly that it seems Adagio came along only to antagonize the others... but she may have honestly been trying and found them unworthy. it's a shame because in her shoes I would have to agree. things they said were mostly tactless and insensitive
"I like you, Sunset Shimmer, but I'd have to choose nothing.” well I suppose this was the other way I expected it to play out. I feel legitimately bad because, pride aside, I completely empathize with Adagio and nothing Dash says detracts from her case at all - it's almost disgusting how RD basically rephrases what Adagio feels heathers reference makin' its way back!
I appreciate Rarity still lending her tentative support as a friend.
edit: I noticed this chapter the club was the Blue Stallions, but in ch 2 I think it was called The Starburst
also, I wonder how that initial meeting went down... if it was tentative and sweet or more like:
"Hey, I have a proposition for you and I think you'll like it"
"Presumptuous, but go on."
"Why don't you come to my place tonight and let me adore you while you dominate me?"
so… Dash has been nothing but abusive this entire story so far. I mean, she’s basically told both Sunset and Adagio that if they don’t behave how she says she’ll beat them. That is not a good person.