Sunset Shimmer thinks Adagio Dazzle is, shall we say, really hot. But Adagio has no interest in friendship or redemption. Fortunately, though, Sunset has figured out what she does enjoy: Being adored.
Page generated in 0.022 seconds
Total duration
889 users online
1,373,147 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I definitly would like more porn :p
MORE PORN!
ahhh....yeah
I like shipfics
Please sir/ma'am, can we have some more? ;w;
Not ashamed to admit that I read (and enjoyed) the first chapter here.
And then this second one is actually rather cute and quite beautiful. I'm a big fan of Adagio showing hints of a vulnerable and genuine side of herself in any fic that I read. So to answer your question, more of both please. ;)
all the upvotes, I don't care where you go with it this is officially the best ship ever
If Sunset had to pick a friend to tell I think she could probably tell Rarity at least without too much risk and possibly get advice or a confidant out of it
Anyone else is either likely not useful (Fluttershy, Pinkie) or asking for trouble (Applejack, but especially Rainbow Dash)
This is a great story. I hope to see this continued!
Thanks everyone! I'm so totally pleased that you're liking what I have to offer so far.
5339751
5332463
5332196
5330570
5330211
5330111
Definitely gonna continue. I'm thinking I'll try and alternate between sex and shippy chapters, just to keep things interesting.
And just for that, Adagio has earned all my respect, she may be a bit confused as to what she's feeling, never having felt love, but at least she has more self respect then to try and deny it.
wow im really liking this and not just the sex (but thats def. a fun bonus :D
I'm maybe little too young for this but I like it!
Man, why it's so fun XD
I'm not one for (clop) but I will not lie that I would really like to see this continued its honestly really good
This is written really well, all the characters actually feel in character. Please continue.
Can you tell us for sure whether you've decided to continue or not?
5483326
I'm definitely continuing. Third chapter is on its way.
Feelz is the perfect offset to sex. They balance one another in my opinon. The feelz feed me. Give me more power.
'bunched up on'
double space
'been a a naughty pony. Actually, no, I'll do that. But not like THAT. I don't give a fuck how well you're doing redemption.”
Probably change this to something like:
'been a naughty pony... actually, no, I will do that." Adagio smirked. "Just not like THAT. I don't give a fuck how well your 'redemption' is going."
'laptop in front them, balanced on a sturdy book,'
Change to:
"the laptop balanced on a sturdy book in front of them," or put an 'of' after 'front'.
“I mean: You need to pay rent, right?”
Change to:
"I mean- you need to pay rent, right?"
'called 'internet marketing'”
Missing full stop.
'Warmth of Adagio's leg'
Double space.
“Good morning, little pony”
Missing full stop.
'separated by own the thin fabric'
only
'That was surprisingly tender, she thought to herself. And then: Should I tell my friends?
Put the thought in italics/quotation, remove the capital s.
Have fun.
"do you feel like I took advantage of you?” one of those surprising (but not unwarranted) questions from a sub. I approve your tactics. carry on
"Actually, no, I'll do that. But not like THAT." hahaha “Adagio, if I didn't trust you, you wouldn't be here.” all I see are these tender lonely hearts. I think it's breathtaking that Adagio cares and admits it they're both really such fragile characters, love it.
"It felt horribly manipulative." Sunset Shimmer really is an evolved individual huh?
"I'm not going to screw around with 'it's not like I like you or anything' bullshit. I have more self respect than that. Yes, Sunset Shimmer, I DO like you. I think." Adagio is so eloquent and self-conscious... it's just so real!
OH! I almost forgot, that dream she has, I'm intrigued
http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/262/832/a50.png
Mother of God... I love this story!
ALL THE FEELINGS! GIVE ME ALL OF THEM! I FUCKING CRAVE THIS GENTLE ACTUAL RELATIONSHIP BULLSHIT! GIVE ME THE FEELINGS!
I may be a tad depraved for some shipping...
Might want to consider a better proof reader. There's some apparent inconsistencies with the grammar. Other than that it's a good story so far.
YESSSSSS
I love when villians stay true to themselves. I wish luna could have done that