In a world, where danger lurks in every corner. Two ponies take it upon themselves to root out the danger and keep Equestria safe. This....This is not their story; no, this is the story of two guards ponies and their journey of ridiculous moments with old strangers and new friends.
Pretty cool story, I have to complement you on the apparent lack of punctuation errors.
Although I was disappointed by the lack of Strider wearing awesome shades.
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Thank you for that, I had revised it over and over until any punctuation error was non-existent, but few will always get through, knowing me.
Don't worry, there will be shade wearing moments in future chapters, I'll make sure of it.
Curiouser and curiouser.
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Now that....reminded me of another adventure ...that I'll try and remember for another chapter down the road
Thank you for that
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H'interesting developments.
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I'm glad you think so
That's pretty adorable. It would be interesting to hear the rest of that story from the other perspective.
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I'd really like to hear the same thing, but Cloie's been....resistant on sharing
I'm sure in a couple of weeks though, I'll be able to share her side.
Thank you very much for your input
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I was wondering, do you have a DA account?
I'd like to credit you for the idea you gave a couple of days ago.
It won't be made till much later, but I thought it would be nice to get it now.
682718 I gave you ideas? When did that happen!?
Erm, I have an empty DA account (used for tracking and getting around age blocks) but I hardly use it these days.
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Ha, it was the one about continuing with Cloie's side of the story.
After talking with her about it, she's finally shared what happened.
I could use both your Fimfiction account and your DA account if you'd like, or just Fimfiction. Whichever you feel more comfortable with
685016 Erm, well if you feel you must then just go with the FiMFic I guess.
I'm just glad to get more story.
Huzzah!
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Erm, Glad you like it!
or excited to see it
722244 It was a warming tale of true feelings and devotion. Naturally a cheer is required for such a touching display.
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You made that week sound way better than it felt, thank you
Since it seems like your the only one interested in what I'm writing, I'm happy to tell you that Cloie's part will come up after the next main chapter we're working on.
The next chapter isn't as romantic, but...it's a story. As for the characters, it'll be Calyx and Vesper. Nothing interesting really happened with us for the past week.
725784 And now I realise that I'm the only person to comment and thus become very self concious....
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Hehe, if it helps makes you feel any less self conscious, Cloie and I really do appreciate your comments and kind words
CHANGELINGS IN THE DESERTED VILLAGE!
Just thought you should know.
*whump*
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See, that would of been SOOO lovely to know back then!
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Since you're the only pony that actually, somewhat, cares about this story, I thought it would be more polite to tell you personally.
I am ever so sorry for the lateness of the new parts and chapters, but we have just been really busy lately.
We will get them out there eventually, but as for an exact time....I'm sorry, but we just can't say when.
We hope you still stay interested, it's nice to have somepony actually be interested.
Well, have a wonderful day/night!
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There is nothing to be sorry for. Love is simple, careing, understanding and patient. I do thank you though for keeping going at all for little ol' me.
I have also just watched my country host the best party ever, it has been a very wonderful night.
Hahaajah! I love it, the concept of a monthly fight for the perfect couple. That's genius. I smell a plot though....
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We're so glad you're happy with it... we felt really bad for taking so long for writing more chapters
The perfect couple though...... that means a lot... so.. thank you very much..
*Giggles* A plot? I'm... honestly not sure what you mean by that...