This took about half a year, cause I'm really busy. Then another year to man up and upload this.
It's really simple. It's just Luna and another pony's love story.
Is it?
Dun dun dun.
She finds love on the moon.
Confusion, life drama, and some comedy I guess. I added a little bit of the episodes and how it related to the story as well.
Well this is my first Fanfic. Hopefully I'd be pummeled by a wave of critics.
I actually wrote this on my iPod Touch, so if it lacks italics somewhere in the story, I'm sorry.
Chapters (1)
Good story, very little grammer errors, and im hooked...
Love it!
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Really? Where?
495355 It's more of punctuation. When 'Shades' explains what he did he spoke 4-5 paragraphs at a time, you only put one (") mark at the beginning of his speech, and one at the end. Every time a character talks in a new paragraph, it needs it's own set of (") marks. Example:
"I saved you're parents. They're out there, in the stars, balancing the universe. It may have been painful for them to be in this situation, but it was the only way. If they stayed longer, Discord may have taken their powers, and give them endless torture. Would you want that? They had no idea about the Elements of Harmony. Only you and your sister did.
They had no chance against that psychotic beast. If I didn't kill them, Equestria would still be in chaos until today.
(it goes on for another 2 paragraphs)
I copy and pasted that. Ever new paragraph a character speaks it needs (")'s. besides that your all good.
495600 Thanks.
1672903 eh? what do you mean?