Fluttershy Says Goodbye

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Fluttershy Says Goodbye

Fluttershy grieves the death of her beloved Angel Bunny

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The Delirium

The Delirium #1 · Oct 15th, 2014 · · ·

Well done. It was sad, but good.

PegaSeraph

PegaSeraph #2 · Oct 15th, 2014 · · ·

MIKEANTHONY321

MIKEANTHONY321 #3 · Oct 15th, 2014 · · ·

Ironically, this didn't make me smile.

StormLuna

StormLuna #4 · Oct 16th, 2014 · 1 · 1 ·

I probably would have felt sad had it been one of the other pets that passed but I'll be honest, I can't stand Angel. When he slapped Fluttershy in the beginning of "Putting Your Hoof Down" I truly wished Fluttershy would have just ate him alive.

Winter The Gimp

Winter The Gimp #5 · Oct 16th, 2014 · 1 · 1 ·

I'm going to be a dick here and say the truth.

This story, although very sad, lacked the proper spelling. I had to stop and reread the words to check if it was really what was read. It had a sloppy execution, and I hardly felt any remorse. It was too fast, and the story of how she obtained Angel was hardly even sad. You might have half assed it or not, but you could've at the least skimmed through the story, even if it meant missing a few errors.
Good concept, but terrible spelling and bad pacing was the downfall of what could've been a great story.
4/10 .
Not that me reviewing means anything, but I enjoy doing it.

Dr Judgement

Dr Judgement #6 · Oct 16th, 2014 · · ·

Needs paragraphs...

Octavia_Melody

Octavia_Melody #7 · Oct 28th, 2014 · 1 · 1 ·

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I probably would have felt sad had it been one of the other pets that passed but I'll be honest, I can't stand Angel. When he slapped Fluttershy in the beginning of "Putting Your Hoof Down" I truly wished Fluttershy would have just ate him alive.

Agreed. Angel must die!

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