• Member Since 11th Sep, 2014
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GalaxyFlower


Sometimes, I feel like people judge my story posts. Not by the story itself, but by the bad grammar, spelling,etc. Some people have trouble with english, and those people turn out to have great storie

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"The age spell is... wearing off?" Yes, and now, Celestia and Luna must part for a while to seek love in a disguise, which is easier said than done. Will it come out to be Luna and Celestia fighting over a colt, or two colts fighting over one of the princesses?

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 8 )

Eeh! I like this story :D

What the What

What that's way to short

Comment posted by GalaxyFlower deleted Oct 23rd, 2014

Great chapter I can't wait for more :twilightsheepish: also I thought the names were perfect.

P.s. If you ever need a pre reader or someone to bounce ideas from pm me:twilightblush:

5207600 Thanks ^_^

Oh, pshh, sorry it's a habit I reply to my comments good OR bad.
So.. Yeah.

THANKS :pinkiehappy:

ok what the heck happened with this chapter. I think you should elaborate a bit more. There was a moment in the story where I thought the prince was just imagining what it was like for a scenario to happen and then I figure out at the end (end of this chapter) that it actually did happen and that he committed suicide :ajbemused:. Yeah so good story, but not a very good ending chapter :ajsleepy:
-netgirl

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Yeah, I felt a bit off yesterday v_v
But still, I was kind of rushed by my alarm clock -_-" dumb thing.
i want to change it, but I'm still thinking
Don't worry, I'm editing it right now.
You can read the bad part now :twilightsheepish: I fixed it! ^o^

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