"The age spell is... wearing off?" Yes, and now, Celestia and Luna must part for a while to seek love in a disguise, which is easier said than done. Will it come out to be Luna and Celestia fighting over a colt, or two colts fighting over one of the princesses?
Eeh! I like this story :D
What the What
What that's way to short
Great chapter I can't wait for more also I thought the names were perfect.
P.s. If you ever need a pre reader or someone to bounce ideas from pm me
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Oh, pshh, sorry it's a habit I reply to my comments good OR bad.
So.. Yeah.
THANKS
ok what the heck happened with this chapter. I think you should elaborate a bit more. There was a moment in the story where I thought the prince was just imagining what it was like for a scenario to happen and then I figure out at the end (end of this chapter) that it actually did happen and that he committed suicide . Yeah so good story, but not a very good ending chapter
-netgirl
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Yeah, I felt a bit off yesterday v_v
But still, I was kind of rushed by my alarm clock -_-" dumb thing.
i want to change it, but I'm still thinking
Don't worry, I'm editing it right now.
You can read the bad part now I fixed it! ^o^