• Member Since 18th Feb, 2014
  • offline last seen Sep 3rd, 2016

Pony-Spartan-ICE-129


hi im ICE. i am a single male, i love halo, fluttershy is my favorite pony, im a pixel artist. (my gamma and spelling is rubbish) and the one thing like doing the most is read MLP Fim and Fan fictions

Comments ( 5 )

I like the idea. Just work on the execution.

The grammar here needs serious work; it's near unreadable in it's current state.

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Wow, you aren't kidding. That description alone is almost painful to read.

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It's grim. I count ten individual errors in the first paragraph of the description. There may be more. Not what one would call a good sign, that.

I think this is a good idea because, THERE'S NOT THAT MANY OF THESE TYPE OF STORY, sorry I've been trying to find some for a while and it's frustrating me out.

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