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Sugar And Spice

Sugar Sweets is a kind and loving pony, even with her disability. Always willing to lend a hoof, she is a mini version of her mother. One day, after a party in Canterlot, she is foalnapped. Can she escape?

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Mangafanatic22

Mangafanatic22 #1 · Oct 7th, 2014 · · · Chapter One: The Party ·

Good so far, but I do have on problem. You keep on saying she is disabled, yet there is no indication of any disablity other than when you say that she is. And there is no way to tell how she is disabled. Does she have a bad leg? Is she partially blind? Does she have speaking problems? A learning disablity? And is it really big enough to keep pointing out? Other than that though, good job! I can't wait to see more!

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