I'm Yours

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DerpyLovesOatmeal

DerpyLovesOatmeal #1 · Sep 21st, 2014 · 3 · · The Second Time Around ·

It's so bad it's slightly good

ThePrettyMare

ThePrettyMare #2 · Sep 21st, 2014 · 2 · 2 · The Second Time Around ·

Thank you for reading my story! and I understand what your saying. I rushed it a lot because I'm on ipad, and typing hurts my hands. So, thanks for the feedback

ThePrettyMare

ThePrettyMare #3 · Sep 21st, 2014 · 2 · 2 · The Second Time Around ·

I can't believe you guys actually like this! I'm crying from happiness thank you us so much!

Ponkie_

Ponkie_ #4 · Sep 22nd, 2014 · 4 · · I'm Yours ·

When trixie told twilight she loved her this is what I immediately thought

ThePrettyMare

ThePrettyMare #5 · Sep 22nd, 2014 · 1 · · The Second Time Around ·

xD hilarious!

ZeroSpawn

ZeroSpawn #6 · Oct 4th, 2014 · · · I'm Yours ·

"I'm here, because I have something to tell you," Trixie said.
"Well come inside," Twilight told the blue unicorn.

with how the quality is for the rest of the story, it would probably be better if you just went ahead and spelled it as cum instead of come

Trixie walked inside the cozy library, and looked around. Their were books everywhere. And she meant EVERYWHERE.

There

"I love you Twilight," Trixie blushed. "Your my everything, and I really want to be with you."

You're

While Trixie was talking, Twilight had took a drink of her tea.

taken

"No fair! Your getting all the pleasure!" Twilight whined.

You're

She placed the vibrator in the librarians slit, and turned the button on.

librarian's

Trixie used her hoof to simulate Twilights clitoris.

Twilight's

Then, they both cummed.

came

and don't even get me started on the grammar. although, honestly, i actually think it's better to leave the errors alone. they make it closer to a "so bad it's good" kind of thing.

Tome