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So much for being alone

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Bloodpool

Bloodpool #1 · Apr 21st, 2012 · · ·

*Reads title*
"So much for being alone by Breeze"
*Reads description*
"Breeze gets a little time away from her family."
*Notices sex tag*
...I ...Ummm ....I have to go now...
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Soul

Soul #2 · Apr 24th, 2012 · · ·

In all fairness it would be nice to explain who is the OC characther that you speak of.
Other than that it's pretty good I hope to see more development from what I saw there was no grammar errors towards it.
But then again....I'm not a Grammar Nazi