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After the loss of a friend,brother,and the one she loves.Fluttershy must find a way to move on.Will she ever love again?

This is my first FIMFICTION.
Cover art by sweet-guts : http://sweet-guts.deviantart.com/

Thanks go to Aviators,their music kept me going. can be found here http://www.youtube.com/user/SoundOfTheAviators?feature=watch
And a few bronies who do not want to be mentioned. :(

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 34 )

475770 I never wanted to hurt Fluttershy. :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: Fluttershy is best pony.

475789 I am so so sorry can you find it in your heart to forgive me?:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

475789

Why do fags hurt poor lil' Fluttershy? She doesn't deserve these things.

Sweet Celestia... This story was... amazing... Yet terrible at the same time. I hate you for doing this to Fluttershy!! :flutterrage: But I respect you for going through the trouble of writing this. Write on, my friend!

Dare to be Different, Carpe Diem, and Live Life to the Fullest! /)(\

476543 Thank you for that.I needed it.
I feel so terrible for putting fluttershy through this.:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:
I have been killing myself because Fluttershy is my favorite and also best pony.

476594 You're welcome, brony. I know there are plenty of people out there that will hate on this fic. And I hate that. People do it all the time and it always seems to get to a lot of authors. And I know that it takes a lot of time and effort to write these stories. So, I just wanted to make sure you knew how wonderful this was. It has a slight touch of the magics! :coolphoto: Never let reader's comments get to you. EVER!!

Dare to be Different, Carpe Diem, and Live Life to the Fullest! /)(\

:fluttercry: Why sir!?!

I completely agree with Death_Brony. It's sad what you did to Fluttershy, yet I think that this was the best story I've ever read here on FimFiction. I love it so bad! It got straight to my heart. Whatever anyone says, never doubt in yourself, you have a true talent my friend. *Clop clop clop*

489304 Thank You,I am glad that you enjoyed this.I still hate myself for hurting my favorite pony,Fluttershy.

489485
Well you shouldn't hate yourself, let me explain. If you had picked some random pony that you made up, like for example Amberlocks, it wouldn't quite be the same story, because we've all got to know Fluttershy, and learned that she is the cutest and the most caring pony. That's why no one would want her to get hurt in any way, and that's what made the story so sad and so beautiful. I do believe that Fluttershy would do exactly what she did in this story so she fitted in perfectly. I think that it was neccesary for Fluttershy to be the, sorry for saying, victim in this story. Without her, the story wouldn't be as perfect as it is. I'm not saying that it's GOOD that Fluttershy was the victim, because she's one of my favorite also. So don't feel bad about doing this to Fluttershy, because it was the, sadly enough, correct choice.
This is my private opinion.

I hope I don't sound mean but...
Is it bad that this story made me laugh my ass off? :twilightsheepish:
Despite the tragic content, the way it's written makes everyone seem like they're either melodramatic whiners, or completely batshit insane. Because of that, and all the fail logic moments, I just couldn't take this seriously at all. It's like it's taking place in some alternate reality where sanity and logic have no place.
I'm not saying this out of meanness. :fluttershyouch: I hope I didn't hurt your feelings.

Why are we fighting over "hurting" somepony? The author didn't hurt anypony, he or she was just writing one of those "what if" fics. It's not like this fic made othe creators of the show actually kill or hurt Fluttershy in the canon world. I love these fics, these fics that are full of emotion caused by non-canon things. It's simply the way of fanfiction.
Keep on writing, my friends.:heart:

I only watched the series to see what all the fuss was about (Mid August 2011).
Finished season one (in a week; counting re-watchings).
Read Cupcakes and MLD (first was meh; second kind of nice)
Anticipated the 2nd season, watched the premier, and rejoiced.(Sept '11-?)
Heard of fimfiction and checked out a story out of boredom. Looking specifically for a Fluttershy one. (Late April '12)
This was the first fic I read.
Registered today (because I have a story idea) and you've earned my first comment, and definitely high praises, because this is such an underrated fic. Sad, but damn good.
:heart:

735622
I Am Honored To Have Gotten Your First Comment And Your Praise.
I Am Interested On What You Will Write,So Now I Am Watching You.:rainbowlaugh:

this is one of the most original stories ever
hate for fluttershy:fluttershyouch:
tolerate for thunderlane:eeyup:
love for your beautifull writing:pinkiesad2:


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Omg this was beautiful.
I cried reading this. I hate it when people keep on saying something like...
"You hurt Fluttershy!..." :/ She's my FAVORITE character, but you really didn't hurt her.
I will give you props. This is the first fanfic I read on here. I'm new to this website.
And boy.. I don't think I will EVER see another great story like how this was. :fluttercry: :twilightsmile:

860926 I am so glad that you enjoyed this story. :heart::heart::heart:
To Fix You
A Rose Reverie <---The First FimFiction I Ever Read
I Might Have Been
These three are some of my favorite stories here.
I recommend them to anyone.

Ah, this was a very, very, very touching piece. Took a while to read, but it was certainly worth it. Very, very good:heart: Made tears come to my eyes many times.
The grammar is not the best, but if you continue to write, you'll get better. It was pretty good for a first piece.

Yo>>862121check ma page if yu want a smile:twistnerd:

Luv ya still
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