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This story is a sequel to Time Lord: The Story of Polaris


My name is North Star. I'm a Time Lord.

I don't know how , but I'm know I'm not where I should be.

I should be in Everfree. Instead, I'm in a little town I've never heard of, and there's a princess I've never met.

On top of all of that... I don't even recognize the pony I see in the mirror.


This story will not be continued. I don't feel any real connection to the character anymore, and have decided to start fresh. My appreciation goes out to all those who have read and commented on it.

Chapters (28)
Comments ( 221 )

No profanity please! :pinkiehappy: Feel free to comment.

Haven't read it yet but you should tag it as the sequel to the first story. :twilightsmile:

If you favorite the story, please also add a thumbs up so I can tell more easily. I have to use a mobile device to check sometimes, and it doesn't show how many favorites there are. Also, please feel free to notify me of any extreme grammatical errors. :ajsmug:

Where is the Luna tag! Don't tell me that they won't go snusnu on eachother anymore.

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Good start! Pinkie knows what's up! :pinkiegasp:

A purple pony was framed in the doorway.

"Framed" either refers to a picture being placed in a frame, or pinning a crime on someone who didn't commit it, so just "stood in the doorway" works better. :twilightsheepish:

Poor Polaris! I mean, North Star. :fluttershysad:

Hmm... I guess that brown stallion isn't hanging around Ponyville in this universe? Interesting. I wonder if we'll see more of him?

With the wings, for a second I thought he transformed into Soarin. Then I realized that the colors were different.

I thought of Pinkie immediately when you introduced Starswirl in the last story... Guess I was right! :rainbowlaugh:

And looks like Luna hasn't forgotten about him after all. :raritywink:

Gotta love the Apple Family. They really are awesome.

And North's just getting all the kisses in this chapter!:rainbowlaugh:

Too bad for Caramel. :raritywink:

3611450 What do you mean? To bad for Caramel?

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I think Caramel likes North, but he's straight.

Comment posted by Thrawn1800 deleted Dec 11th, 2013

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From how he asks North if he's gay and how he reacts when North says no. Seemed kinda disappointed.

Who else but Discord? :rainbowlaugh:

Good chapter. Hopefully North gets well soon.

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The throbbing in his head, healing from his wounds...

And the trick Discord is playing. :moustache:

Saw North Star in title.

Was sad when story not about Fist of the North Star.

So what did Discord do exactly? Did he cast a spell to confuse sexuality or something? Please, I'm confused.:derpyderp1:

3633555 He's manipulating circumstances and increasing emotional responses.

Comment posted by Tnte89 deleted Dec 16th, 2013

3633743 Pretty snazzy. How's mine?

3633798 She's only missing her cutie mark. Its a crossed crescent moon and quill.

Good chapter. The CMC are cute in this story! :pinkiehappy:

3611422 Soarin will be a main character. (Pinkie Pie evil laugh) :pinkiecrazy:

Oh no! Q and Discord? :rainbowlaugh:

Even if the romance between North and Caramel is being manufactured by Discord, I still find it cute. Along with the CMC! "Cutie Mark Crusader Matchmakers!" :rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss:

“Timey Lord!” said Pound Cake. “Take Mighty Armageddon, Pounder of Cakes to his sister.”

“Mighty Armageddon?” I said, laughing. “Pounder of Cakes?”

“Silence, Timey Lord! Take us to our sister, The Great and Terrible Pumkin.”

:rainbowlaugh: That was pretty hilarious!

Hmm, Spike's behavior is odd. Also, why would Mr. Cake have a problem with North being a coltcuddler, but not Caramel? Interesting. Well, on to the next chapter.

Interesting development here. I'm hoping Shining finds North and tells him that Luna is asking about him. A reunion between the two would be lovely!

Aww, North and Caramel had to go their separate ways. Ah, well. At least Caramel's happy, and North will have someone soon enough. Love Thunderlane and Rumble in this. Thunderlane is best big brother! :moustache:

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