This story is a sequel to Time Lord: The Story of Polaris
My name is North Star. I'm a Time Lord.
I don't know how , but I'm know I'm not where I should be.
I should be in Everfree. Instead, I'm in a little town I've never heard of, and there's a princess I've never met.
On top of all of that... I don't even recognize the pony I see in the mirror.
This story will not be continued. I don't feel any real connection to the character anymore, and have decided to start fresh. My appreciation goes out to all those who have read and commented on it.
Chapters (28)
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Mmmmm. Cool.
Haven't read it yet but you should tag it as the sequel to the first story.
3606051 How?
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Where is the Luna tag! Don't tell me that they won't go snusnu on eachother anymore.
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This site blog post shows you how to do so with the new feature.
3607934 Thanks.
Good start! Pinkie knows what's up!
"Framed" either refers to a picture being placed in a frame, or pinning a crime on someone who didn't commit it, so just "stood in the doorway" works better.
Poor Polaris! I mean, North Star.
Hmm... I guess that brown stallion isn't hanging around Ponyville in this universe? Interesting. I wonder if we'll see more of him?
With the wings, for a second I thought he transformed into Soarin. Then I realized that the colors were different.
I thought of Pinkie immediately when you introduced Starswirl in the last story... Guess I was right!
And looks like Luna hasn't forgotten about him after all.
Gotta love the Apple Family. They really are awesome.
And North's just getting all the kisses in this chapter!
Too bad for Caramel.
3611450 What do you mean? To bad for Caramel?
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I think Caramel likes North, but he's straight.
3612708 What gave you that impression?
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From how he asks North if he's gay and how he reacts when North says no. Seemed kinda disappointed.
3612783 He was embarrassed.
3612783 Better? I changed that part.
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It's fine either way, lol.
3612975New chapter!
Who else but Discord?
Good chapter. Hopefully North gets well soon.
3625262 Gets well... from what?
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The throbbing in his head, healing from his wounds...
And the trick Discord is playing.
Saw North Star in title.
Was sad when story not about Fist of the North Star.
3628042 What?
So what did Discord do exactly? Did he cast a spell to confuse sexuality or something? Please, I'm confused.
3633555 He's manipulating circumstances and increasing emotional responses.
3633711 Thnx!
3633727 You're Welcome!
Like my OC?
3633743 Pretty snazzy. How's mine?
3633798 She's only missing her cutie mark. Its a crossed crescent moon and quill.
3633805 It's cool.
Is my story okay?
Sneak Peak:
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Good chapter. The CMC are cute in this story!
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3611422 Soarin will be a main character. (Pinkie Pie evil laugh)
Q is in the house!
3607692 It'll be back.
Oh no! Q and Discord?
Even if the romance between North and Caramel is being manufactured by Discord, I still find it cute. Along with the CMC! "Cutie Mark Crusader Matchmakers!"
Hmm, Spike's behavior is odd. Also, why would Mr. Cake have a problem with North being a coltcuddler, but not Caramel? Interesting. Well, on to the next chapter.
Interesting development here. I'm hoping Shining finds North and tells him that Luna is asking about him. A reunion between the two would be lovely!
Aww, North and Caramel had to go their separate ways. Ah, well. At least Caramel's happy, and North will have someone soon enough. Love Thunderlane and Rumble in this. Thunderlane is best big brother!
3730181 Love cannot be made. He's just twisting events.
3730282 Beware of the shadows. And beware the one ring.
3730373 Evil cackle.
It's going to get better!
3730344 He'll do than find him.