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BloodyBubblegum


You're gonna carry that weight

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Do we all know the mail mare. Do we know the cards dealt to Ditzy Hooves, fellow child of a line lost to time. Her story is wistful and bittersweet. Meadows wash with bathing light, but, in darkest night, she remembers how she became her own tragedy. She yearns long-gone lullabies and simpler, childish times blowing bubbles in the breeze. A wash of sour eyes to show the soul where happiness lies.

[Takes place in the Bubblegum Universe.]

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Comments ( 8 )

Short and to the point. :derpyderp2: Can't believe that I almost teared up in a less than 2k word story. Usually it takes more than that.

I might have to do something- you and your stories already took a few spots in my favorites.

These stories man. Too good. You definitely have something here. :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::rainbowkiss:

4978064 Thank ya kindly, ColonyShipCelestina friend. I can't help but wonder why you think so, though. I'm just an alcoholic writer who likes his manly tears.

Best wishes, spaihs mareen. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

Thank you for writing this piece, it hit me in the heart like a freight train. I lost my dad when I was very young and I have much the same ritual as Ditsy. On my fathers birthday.

4978515 Does me proud to hear you resonate with Ditzy, Prince Harmony. I made this piece in memory of hardships just like your's. And, maybe, in my quill soaking sunlight, I tried to show that hope never left.

Wow. Deeply moving stuff. It usually takes more than 2k words to make me shed any tears so good job there

4979161 Thank ya kindly, empathetic friend. Usually, when imagery itself makes me water mid-typing, I post the story. If not, it's never published. :pinkiecrazy:

Da feels, da feels! :raritycry: Just in a 2K word story, you did an excellent job at making this a very beautiful story. Well done, my friend!

This one physically hurt. Well done!

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