What would happen if there was an enemy no one knew how to defeat? What would happen if Ponyville was destroyed and those who were left were scattered? What would happen if the princesses no longer were? The perfect day turned into the perfect nightmare and the Mane Six are separated. Can they find their way back to one another to try and put things back in order, to defeat this new enemy and save their beloved princesses? Or will the end of Ponyville just be the beginning of the end of Equestria?
Chapters (18)
I like. :)
Wat.
I must know more.
Holy shit. ...
wow...this is some good story....
But you might want to change the title, since " Harbinger" has already been used in another fic.
Im not trying to get on any1 badbooks but....plz do consider as it might lead to some misunderstanding.
btw...im tracking this....
272838 Best reaction. Hands down.
272868 Aw man, it has? All right. I'll need to brainstorm a bit then. Thank you for letting me know.
This is good. You got me hoocked
I must know more!
A good chapter.
327828 Gracias. ^_^
FUCK! YES! YES GOD DAMNIT! YYYESSS FUCKING YESSS!!! Must READDD!
"Incase we have to start over."
RAPE FACE!
Damn that was goo- Moar NAO!
329055 You are rapidly becoming my favorite commenter.
Yay.
Really?
I cried for Sweetie belle. It's so sad to lose a sister.
! But there is one question I have been wondering about this whole chapter.....Where is Spike?! 
Twilight must be worried becasue she's not with him! I just hope he andnthe others are okay. Especially Fluttershy since she is so fragile and Rainbow dash since she was knocked out...right? I know you just posted this but...PLEASE MAKE MOAR!
.........please?
Not Sweetie Belle! You monster!
351847 All questions will be answered in due time, my dear.
I am terribly sorry for making people sad... but Sweetie Belle will not be the only casualty. We've only just begun.
353698 Only....just....begun...?! I'm gonna need to be prepared for this!!
♫Another one bites the dust
Another one bites the dust
And another one gone, and another one gone
Another one bites the dust♪
Another great chapter and cliffhanger, this is amazingly sad
Please continue
465278 Not sure if happy or sad
♫Another one bites the dust
Another one bites the dust
And another one gone, and another one gone
Another one bites the dust♪
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Would this help?
466277 I feel like I should feel bad for making people sad...unintentional rhyme is unintentional...but it actually makes me feel like I'm doing something right!
466625 That made me giggle.
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Yeah. When my old man and I would watch those "peril" sort of movies, especially those that are just awful, we would sing this when a character gets the ax.
Don't take this to mean that your fic is awful. I just kind of have this habit of singing this every time someone dies. Just trying to add a little humor to it, that's all
Then there's the case of the nameless characters, as quoted by Rifftrax in Return of the Jedi:
"She's gonna blow!"
"Oh no! Not that guy! I loved that guy!"
"I'm Hit"
"That other guy too? Where will it end? Those guys!"
All these ponies dying, soon you won't have any left.
466738 now I laugh
466699 Don't feel sad, this story is still good
F-F-Fluttershy.....alone....with..those thingy's....?!
Oh lawd. This is getting good.
This is amazing. Keep up the good work!
Thanks, all!
This seems to keep getting better and better with each chapter, now I want more
501473 I'm working on it!
So I know some people reading this are immediately going to do a o_O face, or wince, or groan, or maybe even stop reading all together because of Big Mac's moment of prayer. And if that happens, that's okay. If you stop reading this far in because of it, well I think that's kind of silly but whatever. I subscribe to the idea that Equestria is not the entire world, but more like a part of it. Meaning Celestia didn't create the ponies, the sun, the moon, blabbity blah. I believe there is a higher power who knows how to deligate. And you're free to disagree with me, just remember this is my fanfic, not yours.
That said, any guesses to who the voice might belong to?
I usually avoid dark, but I do have to say, this story has snagged my interest. As for the new arrival...why do I get a bad feeling there's going to be tension between him and rarity...
531376 You are the second person to tell me that and I take that as a great honor, truly.
531155 I may be an atheist, but just because Big Mac said a prayer doesn't mean that people should get angry, because honestly, there's no reason to. It's just having something to believe in.
Theology aside, another great chapter and with a cliffhanger
Every single story has a cliffhanger nowadays. Personally, I have no idea who it is
This is one of the best Apocalypse Fics!
531904 Tank you for saying that. It does mean a lot to know some people won't really care because I know some really will. I'm a hristian myself, but I'm not going to go shoving religion down anyone's throat. I just think it's common in situations where it seems like the world is going to crap that people - or ponies - would look for a higher power.
I love cliffhangers! It makes you come back for more.
531987 You, my good friend, deserve a big fat virtual kiss for that comment!
532000 Your becoming one of my favorite Fim Fiction Writers! Ps: your name is quite catchy!
My guess is that it's one of the last survivors of Canterlot: a prince that isn't at all charming.
I actually think it's Rainbow Dash. I don't know why....
But then again, when does Rainbow Dash use the word 'loathe'?
532194 Okay, this comment literally made me squee and do a small happy dance. That is so kind of you to say!
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That voice has got to be Trixie. No doubt in my mind.
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GOD DAMMIT! edgnwvS:vds;lkvgd.....
Why must you make me cry?
I know it's gotta be bad 'cause Rainbow is crying.
538742 I am amused at how many people guessed Trixie.
565457 Yikes, and here I thought this would be an entry no one would cry to!
Well...there goes Vinyl...not quite as sad as the other chapters, although the thought of Fluttershy dying...sigh...
Okaaay.....All they need is to find a new Element of Kindness. Shouldn't be that hard. A candidate seems to be on her way to Appleloosa as we speak.
565604 It's Fluttershy! Why would I not cry?
I just hope she will be okay.
565692 One of these days there may be a chapter that has no sadness. Not likely, but maybe!
566859 HAHAHAHA! I am so glad I wasn't drinking anything when I read that first sentence.
568267 Point. Hopefully I'll have another chpater ready to go next week.
Clover and Twilight is my OTP