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Syndicate

-THINKING OF BETTER DISC-

Chapters (2)

Prologue: A Bad Day · 18th Apr 2012 · 156 words
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The Waking Of An Agent · 26th Apr 2012 · 1,492 words
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Amethyst Sparkler

Amethyst Sparkler #1 · Apr 26th, 2012 · · · The Waking Of An Agent ·

Is it good?

lonely colt

lonely colt #2 · Jul 11th, 2012 · · · The Waking Of An Agent ·

Hell, I thought it was good! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_grin.png

The philosopher

The philosopher #3 · Sep 9th, 2012 · · · Talon International ·

I suggest not publishing incomplete chapters, finish them first. Also don't be so terse in writing.
"Don't say, 'the old lady screamed.' Bring her on and let her scream"- Mark Twain

I still think this is a good story though.

Amethyst Sparkler

Amethyst Sparkler #4 · Sep 13th, 2012 · · · Talon International ·

1249800
Alrighty then...

Master-Chief

Master-Chief #5 · Sep 20th, 2012 · · · The Waking Of An Agent ·

This is fucking awesome.

Zephyscribe

Zephyscribe #6 · Dec 28th, 2012 · · · The Waking Of An Agent ·

Haha I dont know what your talking about. The subject matter is not something I personally like, but the writing itself is quiet good. If you enjoy writing there is certainly potential for you.

Xaerouzle

Xaerouzle #7 · Jan 28th, 2013 · · · The Waking Of An Agent ·

The game syndicate is a BITCH! First boss: hard as fuck. Almost last boss fight: IMPOSSIBRU!!! Havent made it to the last boss yet.
Well... I played on hard. But thats not the case why im here. Why isnt there a gore rating?

radiation_pony