Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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10/10
Will read again.
And looking forward to the sequel.
I say, sir...
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All things taken overall, this fic is utterly fucking magnificent. I look forward to the sequel... alternate history...re-write... You know.
Nice addition with Blueblood and his cigar.
so, it's over. thanks for the wild and wacky ride, man. it was a helluva lot of fun!
It's over? Excuse me while I go cry
But seriously, bang-up story! 10/10 would
clopread again.The vision of Luna sitting on the edge of the hot tub took me back to the former cover art. I was always wondering if that scene would make an appearance.
You can count me as one of your readers that are pleasantly satisfied with how this story ended. Anything more would seem superfluous at best. I eagerly await the alternate version. The world needs more Stella.
Well done mate, well done.
P.S. Pusspuss, we're still waiting for Stella in "That outfit!" I will gladly commission you if need be. You know where to find me.
Why would I remove this from my favorites? This is one of my top 10 fics on this site! Job well done good sir, I award you 5 moustaches
Did you steal that line from Rainbow Dash or The Miz (WWE)?
Anyway, this story has been amazing and I cannot believe I have stuck through this from beginning to end. Literally one of the best clop with a plot stories I have ever read.
9.5/10... brava!
cant wait for the spin-off. stella be da bomb
Goldstar and thumbs up, Bravo on a great story!
Now I'm going to have to reread the whole thing again now that it's finished.
This was one hell of an ending. An absolute fantastic story, Flammen.
>Shameless clop with a little bit of a story.
>136,642 words total
What.
Putting this on my read later list for now, but just... what?
Wow, what a beautiful way to conclude the story. From Stella being the best mare, to the beautiful wedding, to the passionate sex, to Frederick writting in his diary about how he'd stay with Luna while claiming her as his best friend. Thanks for this story.
The only thing is would have changed is that Fred somehow gains immortality so they would never be separated. Cliché I know but it would have been for the better in my opinion.
A very satisfying conclusion to a lovely story. Maybe there can be an epilogue about parenthood? Oh well. Still wonderful. Thank you.
As much as I'd like to see the Stella version, I must announce that I won't read it.
The reason for this is that I've invested far too much in this particular pairing that I can't see Frederick with anyone else.
LunaRick ftw
You could still create a few one-shot stories in this world, perhaps months or years after, with pranks played by the protagonists upon one another...
...Please?
"I never asked for this..." ~Adam Jensen
Great story. All the thumbs. Will read again.
I kinda wish the Stella story would be in the same universe with Fred and Luna in the background but hell, I'm sure it will be awesome ether way. Cant wait.
Perfect.
I cant believe its over.
100/100
*salute*
My ultimate respects and thank you for THIS amazing Story.
Ah, man.
This was an amazing read and I can happily say it still is - there's no doubt in my mind I'll be rereading this numerous times. Always need a bit of fluff to brighten my day.
Of course I /was/ hoping for the cliché of "oh now he's immortal and they can be together forever!", but I digress.
I can easily give this a 10/10, a fantastic read - I was always waiting for new installations to the story.
Thank you, for writing this.
sir Flammenwerfer I must say I am so happy to have the pillage to read this exultant story and I will be watching for any new story's and or sequels.
be good and pony on.
Harts Fire
10/10
Normally, I don't care much for anthro stories, but I must admit that this was one that I have thoroughly enjoyed from start to finish. The chemistry between not just Luna and Fredrick, but all the characters was believable and fun beyond all measure, the shenanigans were hilarious and the other "bits" were well made. Of course when you think about it, there is the sad factor that Luna will one day have to deal with Fredrick's passing, but I digress. This was an excellent read and now I have the spin-off with Stella to look forward to.
You have earned yourself a fave, and a story download.
A perfect end for a wonderful story. Well done my boy. Well done.
well you have earned yourself like all the nose boop's
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stayclassy
Is the line you're talking about this one?
I've been following this since day 1 and it's over?
Man I'm already having withdrawal but, hot damn I can't wait for the Stella version. And when that comes out, it won't be the only thing that "comes out"
*Half assed rimshot*
Yeah, this fic is one of my top 5 in the clop section. And I'll follow you along the way. Keep it real man.
*Sigh* I am sad to see that this story have reached it's end, but i do have your next Project to look foward to, so i i won't cry myself to sleep tonight atleast.
I love the fact that the prank the princesses and Stella pulled on Fredrick in the earlier chapter did in fact mentally scar him, it's just to bad that we didn't get to see more of that, like how Luna, Celestia and stella's reaction was once they figured out that they did wound their friend very deeply.
Thank you so much for Writing this great fic and keeping us all entertained for all this time!
Very well done. The journey was enjoyable from beginning to end.
I hope they have kids! (Seriously)
Wow... This is one of my favorite clopfics, not only because of the clop scenes, but also because it has a great plot and it's very well written. Good job.
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6938332 It was really meant as a joke when the story began; it's not really relevant now at all, I completely forgot about that
And so, we finish a wonderful story that had occupied a special place in the hearts and minds of those of us who followed it since it's debut.
For the year and a half we followed this, I'm confident to say that, without a shadow of a doubt, this story was well worth the time we invested in it.
May your future endeavors be as fruitful.
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I know where that stolen line is from. Don't think there are many Bronies who are also fans of Boosh.
Anyway, I've gotta go, my mum's cooking me dinner, I'm havin' spaghetti hoops. Do you like spaghetti hoops? Yeah, they good ain't they.
So sad to see this come to an end, but I loved every moment of it. Kudos to you Flammenwerfer, kudos to you.
Now to find something of this caliber concerning Celestia.
Quɨṫe so.
Jen la abece-kolono! Y'know, when you mentioned that this story would be "shameless clop with a plot", you were right about the shameless clop, but the plot went on-- and on-- and on--! And now! We come to the end.
Well, I'm glad I was part of this wild and crazy ride about wild and crazy rides!
Cheers, Flammenwerfer!
So, if 'My best friend, Stella' is going to be the sequel, could 'My best friends, Luna and Stella' be the threequel?
I mean, if polyamory isn't really your thing, that's cool, but if it is, that fic could be fun.
Great ending, by the way. I'll give the other fic a look, but I'm not sure if it'd be my thing. You've written such a great fic that to not have Luna at its heart would be weird for me.
Plus, uh, Luna's sorta hotter than Stella is. Just sayin'!
As always, sehr gut, herr Flammenwerfer, and adieu.
See that? French and German in one sentence! Boom!
Remarkable. I enjoyed this story to the fullest extent.
11/10!!! Here! *hands out a dozen cookies* Have these cookies, Flammenwerfer!!!
My love for this story is over 9000
Hmm. Finally finished after four days!
I liked this story, a lot, but the "prank" was way too over the top and that killed any liking I had for Luna, Celestia and Stella. It wasn't difficult to see he was really, honestly frightened. Poor beggar being left with honest-to-goodness PTSD would likely have driven a major wedge between him and the three idiots who "pranked" him, which was just glossed over. You had wonderful material for some drama there and just timeskipped it. Admittedly, that probably wasn't the tone you were going for, especially since your were winding the story up, but some exploration would have been nice (probably Celestia and Stella getting matching shiners might have helped).
Other than that one sour note, a well-structured, well-plotted and just plain enjoyable romp. I'll give thus an A as a cloppy story (because, lets admit, they usually suck), and a B+ as a overall fic. Have a like.
Finally finish reading this story. Nice job. Not all love story needs a dark conflict.
This story is by far the best I've ever read! I look forward to the alternate history with Stella. Keep up the magnificent work!
Or, alternately:
Roll credits!
ℵ/10. The only problem I had was that they never addressed the whole "Luna will probably live till the universe dies, so Fred's life is a speck comparatively".
7171062 I agree in parts. The whole tone the "prank" set was too much of a contrast to the presumably intended tone of the fic, as was the one on Celestia if you think about it. Sure, it would have been better if it didn't exist, but that it was pretty much ignored doesn't help, it only makes the matter worse.
I'd gladly read a more serious spin-off detailing the fallout of that shitstorm with all four characters in the limelight. It'd be for me a better ending than this one, which reads to me as artificial happiness, and a good chance to develop a build in the difference of anthropony and human psychology.
This was a grate story. I enjoyed it a lot and hope to see more amazing stories from you.
"... but of course, not only was that un-princessly-like, it was illegal."
Morgan Freeman from Shawshank Redemption?
Wait, nah anal loving?
The Mile High Club?
...and those plain little words put together just so killed my drive No.4 RIP!
I'm curious now what happened to his Earth friends in that thunderstorm if they went anywhere also?
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There once was a man from Bel-Air
While screwing his wife on the stair
The banister broke
So he doubled his stroke
And he finished her off in mid-air.