Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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Yay update. Steamy chapter next time?
This little prank won't end well for both....
let the prank ware began this is going to be good.
Good simpson reference. I'm a bit disappoint that Federick will try to keep the game a bit more and see how much can he last it, but it was work day, so I imagine he was in a hurry, I'm curious into know if Federick knows any human pranks because oh boy we humans are experts in how to make very tricky ones.
neat
stayclassy
This is going to end SO well for all parties.
It would be hilarious if our sunbutt got excited from how defenseless a position she would be in before them, which may turn their pranking war into a sharing conflict.
Oh dear, so Luna is going to tease her sister and then they are going to escape to pretend like nothing happened. Why do I foresee this back firing into sex for Celestia? After all, there are certain habits that she would pick up on that could tell her at least that Fred is involved.
When did a prank of that kind ever backfire...
Looking forward to the next chapter. ^^
6149158 Quite probably not the type of "steamy" we're hoping for though...
Something tells me this whole scenario is going to go as well as trying to stealth the Go Bank on Overkill with only level 20 crew and under on Payday 2.
In other words, it doesn't go well, period.
You have an issue with the word "Coy", mr. Werfer.
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Coy doesn't mean sly, smooth or whatever along those lines as you keep thinking. Coy means shy, demure, modest.
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"Coy - (especially with reference to a woman) making a pretence of shyness or modesty which is intended to be alluring."
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Nah, don't go too far. More like Death Wish on Rats or any equivalently difficult combat mission.
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"Author's Note:
Sorry this took a while. Nothing steamy this chapter, that's being saved for next chapter."
WHADDYA MEAN NOT STEAMY?
It has Blueblood,
THUS MY PANTS HAVE BEEN CREAMED.
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That back and forth between fredrick and stella near the end left me with a smirk, a chuckle and a very disturbing mental image
Yeeeeah, shit will hit the fan.....hard.
I really hope Blueblood doesn't double cross Fred or something like that. Most fics portrait Blueblood as a jerk, but I like the stories which he's not the bully everyone thinks he is
Let the prank war begin!
6152493 Haha I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! And about the style, I do feel that depending on the overall genre of the story, it calls for a corresponding style. Suspense-filled and dark stories require much more imagery and formal writing while light-hearted comedies I feel one can take liberties with formality.
Hope you continue to enjoy!
6152267 Hah! Ayyy lmao
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Just to get it out of my chest, will Celestia be able to join in on their "fun"? I can see how she is taking a liking to Frederick. Plus, the part where she walked in on them during their make-out session and enjoying the show for a few minutes.
6168771 What's making you say that Celestia is taking a liking to Fred (in 'like-like' sense)? They are friends after all, but I'm curious as to why you think she may be wanting to 'tap dat ass?' Legitimate question.
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Well, I am also a Celestia fan and I have been seeing a few signs in the recent chapters she was in: the playfulness, teasing and other stuff towards him. I thought she might want to have fun with him and Luna.
6168783 DO IT.
.....please?
is it possible to the ?
we shall soon see...
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I do hope she means "by their inability to figure out what happened" not "Ooops! How did we do that?" Not that he is complaining enough to catch that slip...
Baka sexy Fredrick
Well played, my good sir.
Well, following the laws of narrative causality, this can only end badly. Here's hoping Fred doesn't end up knocked out again.
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For whatever reason, I read that as "knocked up", and found that to be hilarious, considering who they're pranking... ;]