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An Uncharted Destiny

Luna is born into a pre-Equestria Earth to her primordial alicorn family.

A one shot that could be expanded if there's enough interest.

Warnings: G!P alicorns, mildly suggestive themes. OC for non-canon characters, not shipping canon characters with those OCs.

This fic will likely be rated E or T.

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goaway

goaway #1 · Jul 29th, 2014 · · ·

Interesting one, this. No major spelling or grammatical errors to point out; the deeply lyrical stuff at the beginning was great, but I felt like it petered out toward the end. Still, an expansion/continuation would not be unwelcome.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #2 · Jul 29th, 2014 · · ·

What does G!P mean?

sweetPixiesmile

sweetPixiesmile #3 · Jul 30th, 2014 · · ·

4771016
I hope to find the right voice for it; I'm gravitating towards that, but rushed the ending, I think. I hope to do better, although Elsanna is taking up much of my thoughts.

Thanks for commenting!

4771177
Apparently it means Girl!Peen(is). I tagged it that way because this isn't going to be a typical "Futa" story, but that all the Primordial Alicorns are truly elements of all ponies: gender, sex and tribe.

Glad you asked, but I hope it doesn't scare you off...