Spike joins Twilight and the girls to a diplomatic meeting in the conservative country of Saddle Arabia. There, he meets a woman more beautiful than he could ever believe. But, as he is soon to find out, every rose has its thorns...
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Haven't read it yet but if Merc wrote it, it's probably incredible. Have a fave and like
I feel bad for spike on his hartache but, i'm glad he's slowly gettin over it . Plus twi's rite he has somepony out there for him; he just has to find them first . So, that said i'm goin to keep a eye on this n' see what happens next
Another fuckin gem of a story is made. Yessir!!!!
You usually do Spike good in your stories so you have my full attention.
You have my attention.
I can already till the Applejack and Rarity are going to get yelled at by Twilight some time later. Good story!
Excellent as always, oh an I'm surprised you're not using your humanized names in this one.
Will be watching.
OH my GOSH Spike in the sand cool this have great potential... all the choices.
Poor Spike but he is growing up.
You got me interested in this story,I hope you update soon.
Oh my. I can't wait to get home so I can read this. Gratz on another release, buddy.
Glad to see this is up, had a lot of fun writing this, as I'm sure you did as well.
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Most of my stuff's shit, but thanks anyway, Scatman.
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Well, hope we won't disappoint.
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Fingers crossed, at least.
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Thanks for the vote of confidence, bud. We'll see how we do, then.
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Well, every little bit helps, then.
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Maybe. Maybe.
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Only reason I'm not is because this is technically a collab with a fella who keeps pony names. Otherwise everyone would have their humanized names and be from humanized locations like my other works.
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Thanks for the comment, hope you'll enjoy it.
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Expect an update if not tonight then tomorrow night. Like I mentioned in the author's notes, this is completely done, just requires editing.
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Yep. And I might have to draft you to edit the later chapters, since I edit like a retard.
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It was a blast, man. Hope to do more with you again sometime!
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U probally won't but, can't be too sure on that til a lil further i go in . Otherwise it's just pure guessin on my side
Al' Kair wouldn't happen to be a relation to Altair Ibn-La'Ahad would he?
The thing is, for a scenario like this to really work you'd need to make applejack unlikable. Considering mercs applejack had never been unlikable I'm not sure how he'll pull this off considering this is obviously sparity. Guess I'll have to read and see.
What a great start! Love Twilight and Spike's relationship. I hope this is updated by the time I catch up! Haha
Why does twilight seem easily annoyed by everyone? She isn’t usually this bitchy.