Spike joins Twilight and the girls to a diplomatic meeting in the conservative country of Saddle Arabia. There, he meets a woman more beautiful than he could ever believe. But, as he is soon to find out, every rose has its thorns...
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Great chapter, and Altair, I mean Al'Kair is Amira's 'father'. Nice twist and I'm pleased to see she actually reciprocates Spike's feelings. Can't wait to see what happens when 'daddy' finds out they want to date. Not that he'll have a huge problem with it because Spike is who he is
There are only two words I can think of to describe what I'm feeling after reading this chapter: YES! MORE!
Where nice, I like the chemistry you got going for Spike and Almira. Some more interactions with the main 6 and Almira, now that her and Spike's interest are starting to shine through, will be were fun to read about in the coming chapters. Good work, keep at it, and I'll see you at the end of the next chapter!
Okay, nice twist with Al'kair being Amira's adoptive father. And you can see how the two had influence each other now that we have a connection between the two. And it looks like Amira is just as willing to give the relationship a try as Spike is. Lets just hope everything goes smoothly.
HA, CALLED IT!