Spike joins Twilight and the girls to a diplomatic meeting in the conservative country of Saddle Arabia. There, he meets a woman more beautiful than he could ever believe. But, as he is soon to find out, every rose has its thorns...
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Good chapter! I shall be awaiting the next update.
Mmmm I'm very intrigued in how Spike will grow up in thi fic. great chapter you really write amazing storys
Damn! Twilight and her friends are rude! It's like they can't grasp the concept that different places have different custom. Still a great story though, so keep on updating.
Wow didn't expect one THIS soon. Not that I'm complaining. What can I say, great chapter and can't wait to see what happens next. :P
Every one is polite, too polite...
And spike is coming off as an intense beta male, is that intentional?
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Expect it soon
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Well, hope you enjoy what we got cookin' in the near future.
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Seeing those two comments close together made me laugh for some reason. That said, it's a bit open to interpretation, I think. We'd talk in more detail about it in the fic if we were gonna get political or preachy, but considering they're from a matriarchal society in a style similar to Greece, going to more stringent rules and regulations in a male-oriented land would be something that'd take them a while to adjust to.
And in regards to:
Yes. Yes it is. This is a coming-of-age fic in a sense, so expect him to be pretty damn beta at first.
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Hope you like it, and be sure to view my collab partner's works too! He deserves well over half the credit on this.
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Awfully big and heavy for a relation to an assassin, I'd think.
Quick question: how do you make a burqa out of a curtain so quickly... I can understand a niqab, since it allows the eyes to be seen, but not a burqa... unless they're nearly blind or the curtain is fairly see-through (which would negate their initial purpose)
[quotestringy man in fine clothes appeared to their side, smiling in a predatory fashion at the six women.]when I first read this I thought
I am looking forward to the next chapter with baited breath, you just got a favorite
Hmm, wonder if his intentions are less-than-honorable?
I understand that this is a very realistic custom in the world. I do. And I'm willing to live and let live. But by Celestia! This is annoying the hay out of me! I would HATE to have to do any of this! It's totally different if someone asks to go ahead of me or if it is a safety thing to wear certain clothes but gaaarrhh!
Good story so far though. I can't make out if this is a semi-sequel to Laughing Shadow or not though. If it's not, like an AU from it, that's fine. Just curious and helps set the background setting, you know?