Silver Spoon and Scootaloo could never get along. A class project forces them to.
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Well, I wiped my eye with a napkin and got jelly in it. I blame you entirely.
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I'll take that blame. Your feels are delicious to me. Like jelly.
Nice chapter.
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I love this story so much. I greatly enjoyed the interaction between Scoots and Dash throughout the chapter.
4526271 not understanding the point behind the gif
Fuckin' tell me about it. take out the bit about actually doing homework and that's me since middle school.
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Oh good, I thought it was just me.
Ah well, two short hours in the featured box, and back to obscurity and mediocrity.
Sweet! My favorite story is getting regular updates!
4526464 It's my comment signature, deal with it.
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4526698 Eh i wouldn't think of it in that light. You got a good story with a solid plot(and perhaps a few surprises for us later) with a fairly large fanbase.
Perhaps you're not up there with say Pen Stroke, but you have your own flavor of text based story telling that makes each of your stories a breath of fresh air.
can't wait to see the convo between RD and Scoots about Silver
God darn it! I wanted to see the hearfelt exchange! You tease! I love this story so much...
It's stuff like this that makes me wonder if my readers think these obscene thoughts of love/hate at the end of every chapter.
Is it
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OMC! I think my heart melted in the fiery awesomeness of this chapter. As always I'm loving this fic, although I'm seriously wondering what happened "last time they met" that'd make things awkward.
This is one of my favorite fics ever. Thanks.
I was just thinking about this fic yesterday and now an update, hurray!
So, great chapter. I really enjoyed seeing the conflict Scoots was having this chapter, it struck me as very realistic. Dash was simply Dash, all though I could see all the hints of being a little older, a little wiser, touched like that is why this is one of my fav fics. Honestly there's no complaints that I have, the description of them eating while chatting was very amusing and this has me greatly anticipating the next chapter!
That first part made way too much sense. Rainbow abusing her fame? It's not even insulting; it's exactly what she would do.
Man, I was worried about where this thing with Dash was going, glad I was wrong.
Now I wait...
Really enjoying this one as well. Great characterization and development, nice use of body language. Teen-Scoots brings back some memories, seeing how she interacts with her mothers. You definitely have a lot of threads running in this, and you're handling them well.
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The biggest problem I always have with body language is that some of the most telling actions (in particular blushing when embarrassed or aroused, tapping hooves together to indicate anxiety, half-lidded eyes to indicate sensuality or confidence) end up getting used way too often, because my characters emote a lot. Fortunately, there are about five different ways to indicate a character is blushing (blush, flush, redden, pinken, darken, etc...), which makes it a little easier to mix it up. Still, the challenge is very real, and I often fret about it.
4558713 I hear you. When writing my shipfic with Fluttershy, you might imagine how often the poor dear blushed, and trying to keep that from getting ridiculous is tough. One thing I tried was having her reach a threshold. Harden her against embarrassment after a time, at least in the presence of this one pony, allow her to *function* without going beet-red...until something happens that breaches a new threshold, setting her off again. Repeat.
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I can only imagine the unique challenge of trying to ship Fluttershy without her just becoming permanently red. Just one of the ten thousand reasons you'll never see a Fluttership fic from me.
A full week of no sleep and a story to keep me up all night....i thank you for this story you sir are making one hell of a change on my views of silver spoon i really hope you keep going with this story cause it needs to end with a bang not just another cliff hanger
i love this story. this just played with my emotions in the best of ways. thank you for writing this, and i hope you continue writing
"FAST PONE," SAID CHICKEN PONE. "I HAVE THE GAYS!"
"IT'S OKAY CHICKEN PONE!" SAID FAST PONE AS SHE SNOOT BUMPED HER.
"WHY YOU DO?!?"
"I AM COVERED IN GAYS AND FOUGHT CHICKENS, FOR I AT LEAST HAVE ONE OF THESE THINGS IN COMMON!"
"WOAH CHICKEN PONE!" SAID SPOON PONE! "ONLY WE CAN HAVE THE GAYS FOREVER!"
"OH SNAP, I DIDN'T SEE SUCH A THING!" SAID CHICKEN PONE!
"WHY NOT BOTH?" SAID FAST PONE.
THEN THE GAY PONES WERE TRIPLED.
This is my favorite Silver Spoon story.
Eagerly looking forward to an update.
False update?
4592791 I don't think I've ever quite laughted as hard as I did reading your comment. That... That was fucking hilarious XD
ok seriously whats up with this "slightly better than work, and most unexceptional crap that everyone's saying, cause Iv'e been in basic for the past 10 weeks so (not trying to offend anyone), it sounds completely retarded to me. so what the hell does it mean? Because it actually feels kinda like authors are going out of their way to put it in their dialog, when other word choices would be better suited
i admit, the heart to heart made me tear up.
beautiful story you got here, It weird me out to read the comments and not just see unanimous praise for your work <_<
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Where does it say / who said 'Slightly better than' and "unexceptional'?
I searched for that, and only your post has those words in it.
Gah! This scene with Dash is just perfect. I really do love the ScootaDash you have here, they really are perfect for each other even with the age gap. Seriously just freaking epic.
Have a cookie.
this...Honestly had to be one of the BEST representations of Dash I have ever seen. Just Wow. Way to make me love my favorite character even more.
Marvelous work, absolutely marvelous work.
This was one of the best Scootaloo x Dash moments I have ever seen!
Awesome work!
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Always nice to see Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo together, acting as if they were sisters. This was such a sweet chapter.