Silver Spoon and Scootaloo could never get along. A class project forces them to.
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Double update! Awesomeness!
Wow things got heavy quick. I'm a bit torn on Silvers rationalization though...
All things considered, I guess I can understand that line of thought.
Can't wait for more.
Two whole chapters. And they were both so good. Can't wait for more.
Two fantastic updates, must be my birthday xD
Gahh!! Finally an update, and now drama!
That might have been the worst possible way for Silver to find out about Scoot's feelings. I can see why you did it.
Don't think any fanfic has got me to say "Oh s***," to myself as many times as this one chapter did. The suspense is killing me!
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That's my take, too.
oh wow, if a solo session with scootaloo is that hot, can't wait to see what happens between them for real
5056231 it will be better in every way. A loving couple in the depth of passion is a remarkable thing to write.
This fic simply gets better and better as time goes on. The drama is high, the feels are longing, and the shipping is getting evermore intense.
These emotions are making my head spin
Poor Silver Spoon. I can see how this would confuse the crap out of her, knowing where she's coming from. Don't lose hope, SS, nobody is laughing at you or trying to trick you. You're just earnestly adorable
5056277 that why I love your work Kiro
I've stayed up far too late to read all this, yet that is what I've done because I couldn't stop.
This is damn good stuff.
Also, I have never before at any point in my life thought to myself "Fuck me. I am Silver Spoon."
So congrats or something.
Well fuck me....this is sooooooooooooo good....keep it up please....i want bloom and sweetie fucking in 5 chapters or less!
I was going to say that Scoots would do well to practice some mental discipline when she has company at her house but then I remembered who we're talking about and the D word suddenly seemed kind of like some quaint joke.
I am now most worried at SS's expense...
In other news, Scootaloo is very daring.
Ah, I assumed the whole she's only using me for her own sexual gratification element was going to come into this. But damn even though I know it isn't the case I still cant live with the idea that Silver Spoon might think that it is. (Basically what I'm saying is bring the next chapter out quickly damn it! cliffhangers are my Achilles heel.)
PS: Awesome chapter very much anticipating the next one.
You stinker...
You posted two chapters at once just for the cliffhanger, didn't you.
If I sound angry, it's because I'm frustrated that there isn't any more to read and there's nothing I can do but wait. Which means I really like this fic.
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5056930 Bloom and Sweetie, huh? Yeah, that probably won't happen. Spoon and Scootaloo, though...five chapters might be a bit soon but it's definitely coming.
Damn here comes the drama... It's so frustrating to see her think she's being used and yet... It's so perfect.
I think now things are going to blow up on scootaloo's face. SS is going to be very aloof around her now and when she'll ask why then I guess shit will hit the fan... This would be the worst possible thing !
I'll have some more please, with some nice make up sexy time for desert.
Adams is an English patronymic of http://www.behindthename.com/name/adam Which has several meanings that would've made a more truer ponification than Arab [which I don't think would be in the venicular since they have Saddle Arabia, and Maredovia]. But that's just me being finicky over renaming Adams as Arab. Nothing against the Arabian people, but it's nothing close to Adams, or the definition of Adam. And it really doesn't make sense.
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now on in what? And why just Spoony?
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I can't wait to see what happens when Spoons confronts Scoots about this. With her insecurities, fears, and past history I can see it coming out sooner rather than later. If just to get that fear off her chest. Nonetheless, cool chapter. I can't wait to see her family and friends reaction to her coming out of the stable.
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I'm curious what alternatives you would use, mostly because I spent a long time contemplating pony puns for Robin Williams films, and there aren't many, honestly.
Also, Scootaloo is expressing her decision to only fantasize about sex with Silver Spoon from now on, because the orgasm was just that awesome.
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Oh I agree, Ponyfication of things is insanely difficult, and other than that one, if I was an Equestrian those would have been films I would've loved to have seen [especially since the Earth versions are some of my favorite films of his]. Still you could go with Adams. Since http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Adams_Pearmain is a type of Apple. Merging the sir names Adams and Pearmain [Ha! Adams Apple]. You can keep Adams as a member [second cousin twice removed] of the Apple Family. And an Apple a day keeps the doctors away. Which funnily enough, Patch Adams' hospital, was all about correcting the injustices of the modern medical field. So it fits still as is.
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Found this ponyfied Patch Adams, when looking for pre-existing Patch Adams ponyfications.
And sweet! Yeah Scoots did seem to really enjoy that one .
Damn it all. Now comes that dreadful waiting time between the point of everything-goes-wrong and the moment you update the next chapter.
OH GOSH!!! WHY!!! This is a wonderful story! I neeeeed the next chapter NOOOoooowwww!!!!!
Well... That was certainly something. Though one has to wonder how the contact between Scootaloo and Silver Spoon play out from this point onward.
I imagine that this could provide some juicy blackmail if a certain snobbish mare were to find out about it.
Just got caught up, this is an excellent story. Have a favorite.
5062347 I would've used Patch Apple, because, y'know... Adam's Apple.
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I'll show myself out.
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Well, this version of Snails/Glitter is specifically in line with the Ask Glittershell tumblr, which as yet hasn't explained whether Glitter is a transsexual, a transvestite, or what.
Given my druthers, I'd make her a pre-magic transmare (analogous to a pre-op transwoman, naturally), so for the sake of this story, assume that's what she is. She identifies, dresses, acts as female, but is still, for all intents and purposes, biologically male.
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Huh, I should've used Patch Apple. At the very least it seems less of a stretch.
Ah well. I swear I have a harder time thinking up good puns than I do actually writing.
5095891 Hmm, ok. So basically a cross-dressing colt with gender identity issues. To be honest, I've never read an MLP fanfic that's ever had such a character. It shall be interesting to see where you take this, if you intend to make "Glitter" a regular character.
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Semi-regular. As yet she's just a cameo. She's part of the universe, and this was as good a way to introduce her without being obvious about it.
I love Glitter, though. There may be a story centered on her in the future. I identify with her in a profound way, so I plan to try to include her as much as is feasible.
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You got not only Adam's Apple [body part], but Pearmain-Adams Apple [a fruit]. So technically Patch Adams doesn't need to be changed since it's already properly Ponyfied. Or at least fits into a Pony Theme [Since Patch Adams name wasn't origionally Patch Adams. So dropping the Apple part of the name could work]. That and the Apple Family are Earth Ponies, which he was XD.
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Okay... I was expecting "that"... but I was not prepared for "THAT"...
That was certainly... graphic...
Other than the fact that I was totally no prepared for the graphic nature of this chapter, I thought this was very well written. I am concerned about Silver Spoon's position considering she has very little context to what she just witnessed and I do sincerely hope that she tries to become more informed and does not immediately jump to the worst possible situation.
Like I said before, even with the graphic nature that is included in this story, this is not a clopfic. I have read clopfics before but I no longer do read them, they started to make me feel uncomfortable.
This is not a clopfic, this is a adult novel. Despite the graphic nature that is contained in this story, that graphic nature is surrounded by well rounded characters, an interesting plot, well written dialogue and an interesting development, look and motivations of characters.
I am certainly eager to see more of this story.
P.S.
I was very surprised that you made snails (Glitter) a transsexual, I am not mad at this story addition but I would like to see it looked at more. Of course that is your decision as the author and I would not be angered at it not being included, it's simply something that I find interesting.
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Thanks! I generally can't write clopfics, despite my best efforts. Even my quickest, least in-depth sex stories involve enough story and character to render it a multi-chapter affair.
That said, I really do enjoy properly explicit scenes. Sex is as much a part of the beautiful tragedy of life as anything, and one way I like to explore my characters and their feelings is through their most private moments. The graphic nature of these scenes is intentionally designed to make the characters feel exposed, to let the reader see how they act and think when they lay themselves bare.
Additionally, sex is fun, and writing/reading about it is similarly fun. Suffice it to say most other cloppy chapters will be at least this graphic, if not moreso, especially once these two stop dancing and get busy.
Re: Glitter. Glittershell is a direct homage to the Ask Glittershell tumblr. As an MtF, I identify very strongly with the themes and the story of the Glittershell tumblr, and I plan to use her as much as I can. It's not feasible to include her too much in this story (she has her own life to get on with, after all), but I do want to eventually write a standalone story about her. Might take some time, though.
While I still say Patch Adams wouldn't need ponification. Patch Apple is tons better than Patch Arab. Still this was a good chapter. Very intense. Although I find it sad that people did tribute chapters to Robin Williams when he bit the dust. But I haven't seen anyone do anything for Lenard Nemoy / Spock. Who was a major part of a lot of kids childhoods.
Nonetheless, great fic.
Scootaloo gave Silver quite the show didn't she?