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The Storybook Graveyard209 stories ·16 members

When I Met Fluttershy

This is about two interesting OCs that stumble upon love with two beautiful mares. Who are these mystery ponies? Read and find out!!

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Chapter 1 · 18th Jul 2014 · 1,371 words
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Chapter 2 · 8th Aug 2014 · 1,241 words
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Chapter 3 · 12th Aug 2014 · 1,624 words
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CrackedInkWell

CrackedInkWell #1 · Jul 19th, 2014 · 1 · 1 · Chapter 1 ·

Welp, it's a start.

CrackedInkWell

CrackedInkWell #2 · Aug 9th, 2014 · · 3 · Chapter 2 ·

Before anyone says anything, I personally know this writer. This is his very first fanfic he's ever written. Please give the guy some constructive criticism to help him improve.

hastaguspacho

hastaguspacho #3 · Aug 9th, 2014 · · · Chapter 2 ·

4821080 well I see it is his first easily. Not to be rude I never made one because the admins say you need to do 20 different things.

CrackedInkWell

CrackedInkWell #4 · Aug 9th, 2014 · · · Chapter 2 ·

4821553 Look, my best friend is transcribing this from his hand written story. He's very eager to have this up here. I know that he's not the best writer in the world, but he's passionate to have these up here at all.

All I simply ask is to help the guy out. At least point out the grammar mistakes so he can learn how not to do them again.

Now, I know what your thinking: why not should I do it? Because the truth is, later on, I helped him write it, but did so by phone so I couldn't see what he was doing. So all I ask is to help him where I couldn't.

hastaguspacho