Twilight's appreciation for the beauty of the night sky has only increased with Luna's return, especially after they meet to discuss her latest addition. One meeting becomes two, becomes a regular outing, it's no wonder they would grow
5854237 Ah, yea that does happen. sucks that even though the story is rated M some of the readership is still underaged to see the visual images of the subject matter.
Damn it, Aloe, you had one job! This story is well on its way to sending poor Twilight to a room with nice padded walls. At the very least, her 'dance card' will probably be empty for a long while to come.
Thanks for the emotional roller coaster! It's been a great ride so far.
I wonder how long it'll be before Rarity leads a search party for Twilight and finds her surrounded by bottles, trying to drink enough to forget thinking that.
Ive been waiting forever for the next chapter! Im literally on edge for the rest of the story. Landgrave you are a God of writing! I might just a new shipping to. Twilight/Lotus is adorable.
I didn't think she'd make that leap. It looked more like the author was pointing toward Twi writing a too vague letter about discovering two sisters in a sexual relationship and Celestia thinking she was talking about her and Luna. Then hilarity ensues.
I have to wonder what the spa twins are thinking now. Imprisonment? Banishment? Imprisonment in the place they are banished to?
I wonder if Twilight is ever going to appologise to the Spa sisters. It's good, that you aren't the type of writer who makes them speak in the most attrocious, word slaughter in the written language (we see in the latest episode that while soft spoken, and a very light accent, not thick at all). It's very refreshing to see.
Although now that she saw it (and the second Lotus stepped out with sex mane, I knew that they were a couple), she can't but help connecting Tia and Luna as a couple. I hope that she gets over her actions to the Lotus, and makes things up to them. After all it's not only rude to bang than run, but to just teleport out after getting it on. And Tia and Twilight's mother didn't bring her up to be that type of mare.
Well it's true ... even if the circumstances of that bit of sex is something she wouldn't approve of, I doubt she raised Twilight that it's alright to bolt after having sex with somepony .
Although that brings up an interesting question. Is Twilight a member of nobility prior to her and her friends being knighted (which makes all of them minor nobility)? If so then incest shouldn't be that far of a stretch for her to understand. Since with other than a few exceptions (Fancy Pants and Fluer De Lis for example), nobility tends to marry into nobility (pure bloods) which ends up getting rather incesty within a few generations.
Maybe not sibling incest, a majority of the time, but if you only ever marry into nobility / aristocracy, you're dating pool starts narrow and only gets more narrow as generations move on. At least historically, and socially speaking.
5861396 That's bringing in real world social and political traditions that may or may not fit Equestria. Even then, there is a huge step between siblings and cousins (socially and genetically).
As for Twilight's actions... I wouldn't count on her knowledge of social etiquette to cover the proper response to that situation.
It fits. I mean look at Upper Crust and Jet Set (nobility) and their look on anyone not connected to Royalty / High Society. Blue Blood out right calls Applejack a commoner, and acts with revulsion. Most of Equestria's nobility seems to act on the assumption that aristocracy is superior to (as Blue Blood puts it) commoners.
Add into the fact that Equestria's Canterlot seems to have some medieval England mixed with early Industrial Revolution in it's tech and construction (Throughout most of it), and themes. And that they do have an aristocracy that looks down on non-Nobles (canon). It fits it too a tee.
But yeah, there is a jump between cousins, and intermarriage relationships, and sibling realtionships. But it's not to big of a jump. Not common, but not all that unheard of / outside the realms of possibility. Especially since we don't know the exact size of Equestria's aristocracy, or those few like Fancy Pants marry outside of aristocracy. Since he seems less inclined to judge based on accident of birth (as much as he is interested in potential / connections of the pony in question).
As for Twilight's actions. On one hoof I agree that there was at the time no real proper responce to seeing that. It was quite a shock to her that should have been obvious. But, then on the other hoof. After having bolted in panic, and having time to think. She should at least appologise for her rather poor responce. If not just for social ettiquette, of getting what she craved for than bolting. Then to put at ease the twins who're probably having a panic attack, on a pony that could quite easily destroy their lives with a single word. In more ways than one.
It could also help her for when she confronts Tia and Luna. Help her logical mind work through things before she does something she'd regret. While putting the twins at ease, to one degree or another. Since right when the afterglow would kick in, the pony they basically had sex with (and in Lotus's case did have sex with), bolted via teleport. And that pony happens to be a well connected princess, best friends with their biggest client (and Ponyville's gossip central), and respected member of the community. Yeah, not happy-happy-fun times, more like massive panic and dread times.
5861558 That is true, but on the flip side, for all we know, they don't discriminate between old and new money like was and is common. Also add in that there is no 'royal line' to marry into (the source of Blue Blood's princehood being up for debate) means that 'blood purity' might not even be something they consider a thing beyond tribe.
As to Twilight, I fear to say anymore lest I give something away.
Well even with no real division between new and old money. And titles being what matters. That's still a rather small dating pool. So the case for historical incest still stands. Modern times, if there are more ponies like Fancy Pants (which is a rarity), than marrying outside of the Aristocracy Might be less uncommon than the past.
But looking at canon, and how the aristocracy treats non-aristocracy. Than it's not at all common. And with aristocracy being inherantly a rather small (in terms of the society at large), the dating / marrying pool is small. So again, incest is something that isn't unheard of in that type of caste system. But as for sibling interrealtions, would be about as rare (and less talked about) than marrying outside of the aristocracy In modern times probably. But not at all uncommon in the history of nobiliy.
But yeah, I look forward to the next chapter. And I really hope that Twilight makes things up to the Spa twins. After she's had time to have her panic attack, then let her actions sink in. They really deserve better than that.
Well, a little late to the point I worried our benefactor, but here I am. I'm afraid I frankly don't have much to comment on; not that the chapter was bad in any way (as if that would be possible with the Landgrave behind the author wheel), just that most events seem transitional ones building up to the big climax. A calm before the storm kind of chapter. Twilight letting off steam (haha, get it?) with the Spa sister was nice, and I find her freakout after finding out Aloe and Lotus are a couple to be believable. I do echo other reader's desire to see her apologise to them, but I was glad to see that Twilight didn't take it too well and go "Rawr, incest, yay, threesome!". That wouldn't be very believable for her character. I do admit that I have always had a bit of a thing for the spa sisters as a couple, though, so that was a nice touch.
Twilight seems to have finally put two and two together, which can only lead to her confronting the Celestial Sisters with it somehow. It's inevitable. The interesting thing I picked up in this chapter, however, that I don't know if others did as well, was what Rarity is up to. She wanted to get some advice from an expert in love for Twilight's case. I remember also how in an earlier chapter Celestia lamented how she had to keep the fact that she had found the love of her life a secret from her niece. Well, Celestia, I'm afraid that due to Rarity's well-intentioned meddling, you're about to not only get a talk with Twilight to look forward to, but one with Cadance as well. Nice way to bring her into the mix.
As always, it was just all around great, what more can I say? I must say I was surprised to see this update, however, I was under the impression that you'd posted a blog somewhere saying you wouldn't update again until you had written all the way to the end... Or did I dream that?
5865835 No, you didn't dream it. But plans change as they solidify. My Editor and I worked out enough that we are confident that there won't be any plot holes or conflicts. And after three months, I felt you guys deserved something.
This story is one that I keep putting off due to the long chapters, but always end up wondering why I put it off for so long after reading.
Twilight’s thoughts all but evaporated, every errant string cut, leaving only that which stemmed from those two words.
That seems about the most perfect description I have read for this situation. Just *snip* Also, very sensual scene.
Her eyes drifted up as though the answers would be found etched in the mantle or found in the chaos of her quest for Luna’s nonexistent… sister?
I just spent a good 10 minutes looking for the right reaction face for Twilight finally putting 2 and 2 together and I got nothing. This is the eureka moment for Twilight that is going to... answer one question, but solve nothing. Some things are better left unknown. You understand.
...and there it is. Though it lacked the bang befitting it. As though the chapter were cut off at the exact millisecond the word entered her mind, without any emotional response, which should be epic, or at the very least, should leave her in a sudden state of emotional shell shock. C'mon, show us that drama. Loved it all otherwise. I saw your strategy once Lotus answered the door in the state she was in. Otherwise the feast for me is in the way in which your character's thoughts are laid out on the page. I am unable to analyze and elucidate character thoughts as deeply as you can. Your words are an object of study for me in that regard.
5938286 I thank you for your praise. As for your complaint...
Don't question me PEON! I am your ruler and
Anything that followed after that could only disappoint. Your personal imaginings of how Twilight reacted to that particular revelation are far more impressive than anything I could hope to write. Just as bad, it would have been too predictable and thus boring. As Hitchcock said, 'There is no Terror in the bang, only the anticipation of it.' I believe I set up enough in this chapter to fully inform the type of reaction Twilight would have, and then I cut away just as I pulled the trigger. You know what happens next so there is no reason for me to expound on it.
5938782 I suppose it's a matter of opinion. Hitchcock knows what he's talking about, but even Hitchcock showed us the 'bang,' especially if it was an emotional reaction, the product the reader is here for. Not showing us the emotional response of the characters may as well be money left on the table. Taken to the extreme, you could take out all the bangs and still adhere to that opinion. But opinion it is, and we all have our own. Look at it this way: I enjoy the way in which you depict the bangs, and you seemed to do so quite competently with Luna's rejection of Twilight the chapter prior. Yes, I could potentially dream up something better. We are all good at doing things our own way. But it would still be in my way. I'm here to read your words and your language, and I'm willing to bet I'm not alone in that sentiment.
5941345 I'm flattered by your compliments and confidence.
There were two other reasons I chose to not explicit depict Twilight's reaction. The first is plot related, so I'll not be discussing it (but I will say that my editor didn't think it a great reason). The second was a matter of time. I'd already spent far longer getting this chapter into shape than I'd planned. Emotional scenes like that are not easy to write and tend to take a greater amount of time and effort. The scene you cite was rewritten more times than I care to count. To add Twilight's reaction would have cost at minimum another two weeks, likely much longer. Add that to the complications of a temporary shift in my work schedule...
Could it have been a great addition, probably, but the price was too high for me.
And I really hope that Twilight makes things up to the Spa twins.
I have to strongly disagree with that notion. Twilight consented to have Lotus take care of her, but Aloe was never part of the arrangement. While she peeked into the room initially, she didn't help with the massage and she didn't ask Twilight for permission either. She just showed up in the middle of it and joined in, only for Twilight to realize her presence afterwards. If Twilight had known about their relationship prior she would never have agreed, obviously. But even if she knew and was comfortable with it, Aloe just jumping in like that would still not be okay.
We see that she was part of it, at least when things got hot and heavy. But Twilight didn't pay attention to it until after the fact. And technically Aloe was doing Lotus, and the tail pulling to help her get the best orgasm ever. It's not Aloe's fault that Twilight was only focused on herself after she started getting into it.
That traveling Igor assured me it was all the rage in Canterlot, generally set up next to your surgery table but as far from your lightning rod as possible, for safety reasons.
You are correct, 5999698, Aloe did join in fairly early. However, 5999576, has a point. That Twilight didn't notice is not de facto consent. As to what Twilight will do about it... Did you really think I was just going to tell you? You should know me better than that by now.
Technically since Aloe was having sex with Lotus. It can be argued that she didn't have sex with Twilight. But yeah I just hope that Twilight doesn't ruin their lives for their relationship (really all I hope for. Anything else is gravy.). Since what she does (And what Tia and Luna will end up over hearing) will determine how Luna and Tia treat Twilight in the future. As well as how bad things can go when Twilight finds out. Both for her love life, and for the lives of those she loves.
You mean the tail pulling? Sure there was that. But the one who did any actual penetration was Lotus. The tail pulling, at least in a legal sense could be could considered an accident [sure it wasn't, but still plausable deniability]. Although I don't think Twilight's the type to pull that card. Worst comes to worst, she was making on her lover who was having sex with Twilight. And her hoof ended up in Twilight's tail.
It was just a coincidence that the pulls coincided with Lotus's goal of giving Twilight a super orgasm. Could happen to anypony.
Imagine, if you would, the physical position Aloe would need to be in so that she could both grasp the base of Twilight's tail and pleasure her sister while her sister pleasured Twilight. Now consider the possibility that they simply switched places once or twice.
Dang it, I was trying to find a way that wouldn't end with anyone calling rape, or the Spa Twins not ending with their lives in tatters if Twilight goes public about their incestual relationship.
Edit: I quite like the sisters here. They aren't like in a lot of fics where they butcher the written language with a murderous vengeance. And their kinda hot. Not because of who they are doing, but because they have a nice color scheme and good curves.
6000616 when is the next chapter planned/estimated to be released? I've been holding off on this chapter hoping that a new one will be released before I get to reading it and since I have now read it and there is no new chapter I felt like I had to ask if you had an expected release date
YES! A new chapter!
Oh thank Luna!
Love it as always
Well, Twilight's beginning to put 2 and two together.
Twilight is beginning to catch on.
I wonder what that letter would look like...
5853833
I'm deleting your comment due to a violation of site rules. But yeah, I saw it too.
Oh my!
5853845
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5853845 What was the violation?
5854089 5854207
X-Rated image link.
5854237 Ah, yea that does happen. sucks that even though the story is rated M some of the readership is still underaged to see the visual images of the subject matter.
5854294
It has to do with ad revenue and nothing else.
Damn it, Aloe, you had one job! This story is well on its way to sending poor Twilight to a room with nice padded walls. At the very least, her 'dance card' will probably be empty for a long while to come.
Thanks for the emotional roller coaster! It's been a great ride so far.
I wonder how long it'll be before Rarity leads a search party for Twilight and finds her surrounded by bottles, trying to drink enough to forget thinking that.
As I was reading the final part of this chapter I could hear the gears in Twilight's head turning
Yeah, it's hard NOT to ship Aloe & Lotus. It's the whole sisters/spa-girls (or nurse) thing. And Twilight is STILL a prude.
5854237
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That dawning moment of realization where everything just -clicks- together and everything makes sense.
Ive been waiting forever for the next chapter! Im literally on edge for the rest of the story. Landgrave you are a God of writing! I might just a new shipping to. Twilight/Lotus is adorable.
Have I said "it begins!" Yet?
I can't remember if I said "it begins!" In this story yet.
...
I'll say it anyways.
IT BEGINS!
I didn't think she'd make that leap. It looked more like the author was pointing toward Twi writing a too vague letter about discovering two sisters in a sexual relationship and Celestia thinking she was talking about her and Luna. Then hilarity ensues.
I have to wonder what the spa twins are thinking now. Imprisonment? Banishment? Imprisonment in the place they are banished to?
5860177
I see no 'Comedy' tag.
... I wasn't... *sigh* just never mind.
5860189
Ah, well, in that case, the next chapter will throw you for a loop. Or not. I am terrible at judging how people will react to things.
I wonder if Twilight is ever going to appologise to the Spa sisters. It's good, that you aren't the type of writer who makes them speak in the most attrocious, word slaughter in the written language (we see in the latest episode that while soft spoken, and a very light accent, not thick at all). It's very refreshing to see.
Although now that she saw it (and the second Lotus stepped out with sex mane, I knew that they were a couple), she can't but help connecting Tia and Luna as a couple. I hope that she gets over her actions to the Lotus, and makes things up to them. After all it's not only rude to bang than run, but to just teleport out after getting it on. And Tia and Twilight's mother didn't bring her up to be that type of mare.
5861221
Now now now, let's not bring Velvet into this. Who knows where would go with that.
5861275
Well it's true ... even if the circumstances of that bit of sex is something she wouldn't approve of, I doubt she raised Twilight that it's alright to bolt after having sex with somepony .
Although that brings up an interesting question. Is Twilight a member of nobility prior to her and her friends being knighted (which makes all of them minor nobility)? If so then incest shouldn't be that far of a stretch for her to understand. Since with other than a few exceptions (Fancy Pants and Fluer De Lis for example), nobility tends to marry into nobility (pure bloods) which ends up getting rather incesty within a few generations.
Maybe not sibling incest, a majority of the time, but if you only ever marry into nobility / aristocracy, you're dating pool starts narrow and only gets more narrow as generations move on. At least historically, and socially speaking.
5861396
That's bringing in real world social and political traditions that may or may not fit Equestria. Even then, there is a huge step between siblings and cousins (socially and genetically).
As for Twilight's actions... I wouldn't count on her knowledge of social etiquette to cover the proper response to that situation.
5861474
It fits. I mean look at Upper Crust and Jet Set (nobility) and their look on anyone not connected to Royalty / High Society. Blue Blood out right calls Applejack a commoner, and acts with revulsion. Most of Equestria's nobility seems to act on the assumption that aristocracy is superior to (as Blue Blood puts it) commoners.
Add into the fact that Equestria's Canterlot seems to have some medieval England mixed with early Industrial Revolution in it's tech and construction (Throughout most of it), and themes. And that they do have an aristocracy that looks down on non-Nobles (canon). It fits it too a tee.
But yeah, there is a jump between cousins, and intermarriage relationships, and sibling realtionships. But it's not to big of a jump. Not common, but not all that unheard of / outside the realms of possibility. Especially since we don't know the exact size of Equestria's aristocracy, or those few like Fancy Pants marry outside of aristocracy. Since he seems less inclined to judge based on accident of birth (as much as he is interested in potential / connections of the pony in question).
As for Twilight's actions. On one hoof I agree that there was at the time no real proper responce to seeing that. It was quite a shock to her that should have been obvious. But, then on the other hoof. After having bolted in panic, and having time to think. She should at least appologise for her rather poor responce. If not just for social ettiquette, of getting what she craved for than bolting. Then to put at ease the twins who're probably having a panic attack, on a pony that could quite easily destroy their lives with a single word. In more ways than one.
It could also help her for when she confronts Tia and Luna. Help her logical mind work through things before she does something she'd regret. While putting the twins at ease, to one degree or another. Since right when the afterglow would kick in, the pony they basically had sex with (and in Lotus's case did have sex with), bolted via teleport. And that pony happens to be a well connected princess, best friends with their biggest client (and Ponyville's gossip central), and respected member of the community. Yeah, not happy-happy-fun times, more like massive panic and dread times.
5861558
That is true, but on the flip side, for all we know, they don't discriminate between old and new money like was and is common. Also add in that there is no 'royal line' to marry into (the source of Blue Blood's princehood being up for debate) means that 'blood purity' might not even be something they consider a thing beyond tribe.
As to Twilight, I fear to say anymore lest I give something away.
5861658
Well even with no real division between new and old money. And titles being what matters. That's still a rather small dating pool. So the case for historical incest still stands. Modern times, if there are more ponies like Fancy Pants (which is a rarity), than marrying outside of the Aristocracy Might be less uncommon than the past.
But looking at canon, and how the aristocracy treats non-aristocracy. Than it's not at all common. And with aristocracy being inherantly a rather small (in terms of the society at large), the dating / marrying pool is small. So again, incest is something that isn't unheard of in that type of caste system. But as for sibling interrealtions, would be about as rare (and less talked about) than marrying outside of the aristocracy In modern times probably. But not at all uncommon in the history of nobiliy.
But yeah, I look forward to the next chapter. And I really hope that Twilight makes things up to the Spa twins. After she's had time to have her panic attack, then let her actions sink in. They really deserve better than that.
Well, a little late to the point I worried our benefactor, but here I am. I'm afraid I frankly don't have much to comment on; not that the chapter was bad in any way (as if that would be possible with the Landgrave behind the author wheel), just that most events seem transitional ones building up to the big climax. A calm before the storm kind of chapter. Twilight letting off steam (haha, get it?) with the Spa sister was nice, and I find her freakout after finding out Aloe and Lotus are a couple to be believable. I do echo other reader's desire to see her apologise to them, but I was glad to see that Twilight didn't take it too well and go "Rawr, incest, yay, threesome!". That wouldn't be very believable for her character. I do admit that I have always had a bit of a thing for the spa sisters as a couple, though, so that was a nice touch.
Twilight seems to have finally put two and two together, which can only lead to her confronting the Celestial Sisters with it somehow. It's inevitable. The interesting thing I picked up in this chapter, however, that I don't know if others did as well, was what Rarity is up to. She wanted to get some advice from an expert in love for Twilight's case. I remember also how in an earlier chapter Celestia lamented how she had to keep the fact that she had found the love of her life a secret from her niece. Well, Celestia, I'm afraid that due to Rarity's well-intentioned meddling, you're about to not only get a talk with Twilight to look forward to, but one with Cadance as well. Nice way to bring her into the mix.
As always, it was just all around great, what more can I say? I must say I was surprised to see this update, however, I was under the impression that you'd posted a blog somewhere saying you wouldn't update again until you had written all the way to the end... Or did I dream that?
5865835
No, you didn't dream it. But plans change as they solidify.
My Editor and I worked out enough that we are confident that there won't be any plot holes or conflicts. And after three months, I felt you guys deserved something.
This story is one that I keep putting off due to the long chapters, but always end up wondering why I put it off for so long after reading.
That seems about the most perfect description I have read for this situation. Just *snip* Also, very sensual scene.
I just spent a good 10 minutes looking for the right reaction face for Twilight finally putting 2 and 2 together and I got nothing. This is the eureka moment for Twilight that is going to... answer one question, but solve nothing.
Some things are better left unknown. You understand.
...and there it is. Though it lacked the bang befitting it. As though the chapter were cut off at the exact millisecond the word entered her mind, without any emotional response, which should be epic, or at the very least, should leave her in a sudden state of emotional shell shock.
C'mon, show us that drama.
Loved it all otherwise. I saw your strategy once Lotus answered the door in the state she was in. Otherwise the feast for me is in the way in which your character's thoughts are laid out on the page. I am unable to analyze and elucidate character thoughts as deeply as you can. Your words are an object of study for me in that regard.
5938286
I thank you for your praise. As for your complaint...
Don't question me PEON! I am your ruler andAnything that followed after that could only disappoint. Your personal imaginings of how Twilight reacted to that particular revelation are far more impressive than anything I could hope to write. Just as bad, it would have been too predictable and thus boring. As Hitchcock said, 'There is no Terror in the bang, only the anticipation of it.' I believe I set up enough in this chapter to fully inform the type of reaction Twilight would have, and then I cut away just as I pulled the trigger. You know what happens next so there is no reason for me to expound on it.
5938782
I suppose it's a matter of opinion. Hitchcock knows what he's talking about, but even Hitchcock showed us the 'bang,' especially if it was an emotional reaction, the product the reader is here for. Not showing us the emotional response of the characters may as well be money left on the table. Taken to the extreme, you could take out all the bangs and still adhere to that opinion. But opinion it is, and we all have our own.
Look at it this way: I enjoy the way in which you depict the bangs, and you seemed to do so quite competently with Luna's rejection of Twilight the chapter prior. Yes, I could potentially dream up something better. We are all good at doing things our own way. But it would still be in my way. I'm here to read your words and your language, and I'm willing to bet I'm not alone in that sentiment.
5941345
I'm flattered by your compliments and confidence.
There were two other reasons I chose to not explicit depict Twilight's reaction. The first is plot related, so I'll not be discussing it (but I will say that my editor didn't think it a great reason). The second was a matter of time. I'd already spent far longer getting this chapter into shape than I'd planned. Emotional scenes like that are not easy to write and tend to take a greater amount of time and effort. The scene you cite was rewritten more times than I care to count. To add Twilight's reaction would have cost at minimum another two weeks, likely much longer. Add that to the complications of a temporary shift in my work schedule...
Could it have been a great addition, probably, but the price was too high for me.
Every chapter just increases the hype for the next >.<
5982006 Yeah, sorry about that.
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I have to strongly disagree with that notion. Twilight consented to have Lotus take care of her, but Aloe was never part of the arrangement. While she peeked into the room initially, she didn't help with the massage and she didn't ask Twilight for permission either. She just showed up in the middle of it and joined in, only for Twilight to realize her presence afterwards. If Twilight had known about their relationship prior she would never have agreed, obviously. But even if she knew and was comfortable with it, Aloe just jumping in like that would still not be okay.
5999576
We see that she was part of it, at least when things got hot and heavy. But Twilight didn't pay attention to it until after the fact. And technically Aloe was doing Lotus, and the tail pulling to help her get the best orgasm ever. It's not Aloe's fault that Twilight was only focused on herself after she started getting into it.
5999217
That traveling Igor assured me it was all the rage in Canterlot, generally set up next to your surgery table but as far from your lightning rod as possible, for safety reasons.
You are correct, 5999698, Aloe did join in fairly early. However, 5999576, has a point. That Twilight didn't notice is not de facto consent. As to what Twilight will do about it... Did you really think I was just going to tell you? You should know me better than that by now.
Your benevolent dictator,
The Landgrave
5999991
Technically since Aloe was having sex with Lotus. It can be argued that she didn't have sex with Twilight. But yeah I just hope that Twilight doesn't ruin their lives for their relationship (really all I hope for. Anything else is gravy.). Since what she does (And what Tia and Luna will end up over hearing) will determine how Luna and Tia treat Twilight in the future. As well as how bad things can go when Twilight finds out. Both for her love life, and for the lives of those she loves.
6000183
I don't think you were paying enough attention. Aloe was no less involved than Lotus.
6000489
You mean the tail pulling? Sure there was that. But the one who did any actual penetration was Lotus. The tail pulling, at least in a legal sense could be could considered an accident [sure it wasn't, but still plausable deniability]. Although I don't think Twilight's the type to pull that card. Worst comes to worst, she was making on her lover who was having sex with Twilight. And her hoof ended up in Twilight's tail.
It was just a coincidence that the pulls coincided with Lotus's goal of giving Twilight a super orgasm. Could happen to anypony.
6000571
Such is the failing of third-limited.
Imagine, if you would, the physical position Aloe would need to be in so that she could both grasp the base of Twilight's tail and pleasure her sister while her sister pleasured Twilight. Now consider the possibility that they simply switched places once or twice.
6000616
Dang it, I was trying to find a way that wouldn't end with anyone calling rape, or the Spa Twins not ending with their lives in tatters if Twilight goes public about their incestual relationship.
Edit: I quite like the sisters here. They aren't like in a lot of fics where they butcher the written language with a murderous vengeance. And their kinda hot. Not because of who they are doing, but because they have a nice color scheme and good curves.
6000616 when is the next chapter planned/estimated to be released? I've been holding off on this chapter hoping that a new one will be released before I get to reading it and since I have now read it and there is no new chapter I felt like I had to ask if you had an expected release date
6044361
When the election is over.
6044392 k thanks