Twilight's appreciation for the beauty of the night sky has only increased with Luna's return, especially after they meet to discuss her latest addition. One meeting becomes two, becomes a regular outing, it's no wonder they would grow
Why do I get the feeling that this "secret kink" project of Luna + Twilight's attendance at the birthday party is gonna result in unintended but nevertheless hilarious hijinx? =D
I can't say too much else about this chapter. It was utterly enjoyable, as expected of your work, but feels mostly like a set-up chapter, building up to a sort of climax at Luna's party. Looking forward to what that will be.
5227439 I can already picture it. Luna and Twilight dancing, until Twilight asks: "Princess, is that a gun you're hiding in your dress, or are you just happy to see me?"
Though, in all fairness, should Twilight make a discovery like that, more likely her brain would clock out and leave her a stuttering, broken mess.
Not sure if you can call foals a 'kink', though. Unless Luna just wants to see Celestia pregnant and kicks on that. And this post suddenly got all kinds of weird.
Why do I get the feeling that this "secret kink" project of Luna + Twilight's attendance at the birthday party is gonna result in unintended but nevertheless hilarious hijinx? =D
Because you are overtly optimistic? 5227439 I must be overpaying the taboo card for you to gather that much. I will point out, however, that I started this little side plot back in chapter 3, for anyone paying attention.
Currently, her studies were zeroed in on the history and culture of the Griffon empire. Next would be the far more stable United Minoan oligarchy. From there she would learn about the Donkey republic, the Zebrican dynasties, and the Saddle Arabian queendom. All in preparation for the thirteenth World Trade Summit the next year.
Capitalize those. ____________
Changelings and other minor nations notwithstanding, the Summit had brought and end to much of the large scale warfare that had plagued the early years of the Sisters’ reign,
an __________
“‘Tis surely more exciting than the third succession of the fifth Griffish empire.”
I really enjoyed Sogni Infetti, and Cuori Intrecciati is even more polished and focused, and fun. This is a wonderful read... and well, you published just in time for me to finish Ch8 and start right into Ch9 at lunch, for which I was very pleased.
I had no idea until today that Luna & Tiberius were a thing!
5274778 I imagine it's Celestia's (and Luna's) exhibitionism.
Luna gathered her magic, casting Starswirl’s Special Seclusion Shield, creating a temporary magic bubble inside of which she would cast the spell. Looking down at the printed spell work, she began to construct the spell inside the bubble.
Luna's going to try out some fun with Celestia during the middle of the party using this spell. But, who attending this party is not only great at magic and its use, but also most likely has had access to the tome Luna's reading, therefore also knowing the counterspell?
I think everything is going to hit the fan during the party.
Why do I get the feeling that this "secret kink" project of Luna + Twilight's attendance at the birthday party is gonna result in unintended but nevertheless hilarious hijinx? =D
I can't say too much else about this chapter. It was utterly enjoyable, as expected of your work, but feels mostly like a set-up chapter, building up to a sort of climax at Luna's party. Looking forward to what that will be.
Luna's practicing for futa and possibly foals isn't she?
Essentially why I hate rarity in shipping stories, she makes things worse 95% of the time
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I can already picture it. Luna and Twilight dancing, until Twilight asks: "Princess, is that a gun you're hiding in your dress, or are you just happy to see me?"
Though, in all fairness, should Twilight make a discovery like that, more likely her brain would clock out and leave her a stuttering, broken mess.
Not sure if you can call foals a 'kink', though. Unless Luna just wants to see Celestia pregnant and kicks on that. And this post suddenly got all kinds of weird.
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Because you are overtly optimistic?
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I must be overpaying the taboo card for you to gather that much.
I will point out, however, that I started this little side plot back in chapter 3, for anyone paying attention.
I can already tell this will not end well for twilight.
Capitalize those.
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an
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Empire
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Poor Twilight. I wonder what'll happen.
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Oh come on. Why is it always Luna on Celestia when it comes to this?
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With errors like those Twilight would've had a hissy fit
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She loves Luna enough that she at least wouldn't throw the book at the author [unabridged world dictionary] like she'd do with aypony else .
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Fixed.
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I never said he was right.
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So it's gonna go all kinds of wrong and Twilight, Celestia and Luna are gonna be devastated for life?
(It's also funny to be called optimistic as I'm a hardcore pessimist in real life. XD )
I loved this chapter. Can't wait to see what restricted magic Luna is playing with.
I really enjoyed Sogni Infetti, and Cuori Intrecciati is even more polished and focused, and fun. This is a wonderful read... and well, you published just in time for me to finish Ch8 and start right into Ch9 at lunch, for which I was very pleased.
I had no idea until today that Luna & Tiberius were a thing!
You might have seen this already, but I thought this would be appropriate. Adorable Luna and coffee-drinking Tiberius included:
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That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Minoan,
Why is that Human Civilization here all sudden
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Minotaur.
Mino - Taur
The bull of Minos.
Why do I get the feeling that Luna's spell has something to do with love and Twilight?
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Tbh, I'm not sure what other taboo would require a complex spell cast.
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I imagine it's Celestia's (and Luna's) exhibitionism.
Luna's going to try out some fun with Celestia during the middle of the party using this spell. But, who attending this party is not only great at magic and its use, but also most likely has had access to the tome Luna's reading, therefore also knowing the counterspell?
I think everything is going to hit the fan during the party.
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Man, you all have all these wonderful ideas. Makes me wish I'd thought of them.
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LOL Don't worry. There are several reasons to like this story. Those are just two of them.
I haven't even begun to read this one ( the first was great by the way) and I can tell its going to be amazing
5227439 Yeah really gotta agree with you there.