Twilight's appreciation for the beauty of the night sky has only increased with Luna's return, especially after they meet to discuss her latest addition. One meeting becomes two, becomes a regular outing, it's no wonder they would grow
It always amazes me how beautiful you write the romance between Celestia and Luna. I've read many Lunestia stories before, many that were great even, but yours are amongst those rare few were you really feel the intimacy and the pure, honest love they feel for each other. Each word practically radiates affection and love, it's amazing to behold and a delight to read. Not only that, but you show other aspects of their personality so well. I could feel the vulnerability of Luna in this chapter, feel some of Celestia's age old weariness and regret almost as if I was carrying it myself. You have a masterful way with words, almost as if you are painting, putting these images and feelings directly into your readers, as if we are not just reading this, but are actually there and sharing in everything; the bliss, but also the sorrow, the heartache and every other emotion these two wonderful mares go through.
This was an amazing chapter, and I take off my hat for you. At the same time, I am looking forward to the next meeting between Luna and Twilight, as the events of last chapter still are unresolved and I would love to see them make peace again. As a side note, I am also hoping for some interaction between Celestia and Twilight. It's surprisingly hard to find stories that give these two a moment. Just a moment, no drama, no lessons, no love soap opera, no accusations or dark evil secrets; just a moment of tenderness, be it as friends, mother and daughter-ish, or lovers. You have such skill with painting scenes and emotions, that I'm certain a simple Twilestia 'moment' written by you, regardless of its nature (romantic, purely friendly, familial) would be nothing short of wonderful.
4886390 If you keep this up I'm liable to change my name to 'the Emperor' for the ego your giving me.
As to your hopes and dreams... There will be some Twilestia friendshipping in the not too distant future, about three chapters away.
I covered the make up as much as I intend to here. There was a bit that implied an apology during the dream and a mention of a subsequent visit involving Tiberius and Owlowicious. However, you can expect both to be a little guarded (probably isn't the right word) in the upcoming chapter. The issue came down to moving things forward and the scene having little else to add beyond two ponies muttering apologies.
Thank you for your love and support, it makes all the difference in the world. [addendum] I've had very little luck finding other such stories. Besides 'Who Rules', are there any you can recommend?
Celestia only made it a few steps before she noticed that Luna hadn’t moved. Glancing back, she saw Lu
na’s head still down, Tiberius standing on her shoulder and patting her head.
Right at the end, the word Luna is split in half, and a line break runs right through it, as it does above. Removing that break and the resulting carriage returns (The enters, for those who don't know its proper term) will fix the issue.
[addendum] I've had very little luck finding other such stories. Besides 'Who Rules', are there any you can recommend?
I'm not sure what you mean by other such stories. Do you mean princest, Twilestia or all three together?
I know of the 'Who Rules' series, and am willing to give my favorites a look-see (total count: 1948 as of time of posting) and see if i can find what it is you're asking about. Chances are, if it involves any of these three, I've given it at least a cursory glance.
4887549 Ah, if it were Twiluna or Twilestia, I could easily nick half a dozen to two dozen easily. Lunestia... not so much. You're already aware of the 'Who Rules?' series, so that one's knocked off my list.
That leaves maybe four stories, if I can find them. 'Rise of Sunbutt the Awesome' has Lunestia, but Celly's not home in her mind. 'Frank' the human is, so that probably doesn't count.
'Sisterly Love' isn't a clopfic, much to my surprise. It's a good warm fluffy moment between the two, and is a one-shot. I'm not sure if this is what you're asking for, but I feel it's better to include everything that might fit, rather than leave out something you might have been looking for.
'Eternally Loved' by NeonEclipse (Not linking because mature and against rules) is a clopfic oneshot-turned-twoshot. The second chapter is more about feelings and the relationship itself, not really anything else. I rather liked it.
That's about it that I can find. There are a number of old-and-truly-dead (circa mid-late 2012 last update) fics that would have beefed up this list greatly... but they never really stood a chance, and that saddens me greatly.
Even as many stories as I've read, a serious story about the pairing is rare. I can only really think of your stories, Who Rules? and Rise of Sunbutt. All the rest are either just fluffy one shots, which while adorable, aren't exactly serious or lengthy enough. Or they're princest sex for princest sex.
Edit- Forgot the obvious one in the final paragraph.
4889775 That pretty much sums up what I've found. There are a few decent clops... but none really delve into them as a real couple. 'Diary of the Mare in the Moon' kinda sorta has it, but it's not really a romance. 'Eternally Loved' was good. 'A Finer Vintage' is on my read later list, but I'm not sure where it takes things (rated teen as it is).
'A Finer Vintage' was a nice little shot. Was much like 'Eternally Loved', just with a different starting premise and no (actual) clop. There is... one other story I've found, but it's long dead. Moreso than the usual kind of long dead. It's called 'Luna's Plight', and it's on FF.net, not here. The story was very promising when I found it, and since then I still see if the author's come back to update it every couple months. Still no luck, but them's the breaks.
With gradual tilt of her hea, Luna rolled Tiberius out of the way and behind her ear so that he was draped over the crown of her head.
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"You are my warm, fluffy, squishy, sexy pillow, and I love it, and you love that I love it.” Luna shifted some more, murmuring softly before whispering, “Now, be a good pillow and stop talking."
That line was too awesome. ______________________________
You could always get a refund, or send it to Pinkie Pie to bake their anniversary cake. I hear she's great at cooking feels into her treats .
That and I'm not saying there can't be some starting friction [good drama [well played] => good tension => Good TwiLunEstia]. After all Twilight could work well with either Luna or Celestia, at the moment. And I'm sure she could pull off all three with plenty of feels. Although who she goes for first, and the other's reaction is a good form of drama / tension between all parties.
“Oh! Whatever shall I do? I beg of thee, thou dark and beauteous scoundrel, I am but a fair and frail maiden… be gentle.” A growl rolled in Luna’s throat. “Fair thou mayest be,” her dark wingtips traced down Celestia’s barrel, “and sensuous as well, but neither frail nor maiden couldest be applied to thine arousing form.” Leaning closer, she whispered, “Fearest thee not mine wondrous Sun, for mine desire is but to steal a single kiss from thine lips.”
FINALLY!!! Someone with a proper understanding of archaic middle English! You have won infinite respect from me!
A growl rolled in Luna’s throat. “Fair thou mayest be,” her dark wingtips traced down Celestia’s barrel, “and sensuous as well, but neither frail nor maiden couldest be applied to thine arousing form.” Leaning closer, she whispered, “Fearest thee not mine wondrous Sun, for mine desire is but to steal a single kiss from thine lips.”
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“Dost thou intend to elucidate the themes of all thine works?”
Sweet in some spots, heavy in others.
MOAR! Please?
It always amazes me how beautiful you write the romance between Celestia and Luna. I've read many Lunestia stories before, many that were great even, but yours are amongst those rare few were you really feel the intimacy and the pure, honest love they feel for each other. Each word practically radiates affection and love, it's amazing to behold and a delight to read. Not only that, but you show other aspects of their personality so well. I could feel the vulnerability of Luna in this chapter, feel some of Celestia's age old weariness and regret almost as if I was carrying it myself. You have a masterful way with words, almost as if you are painting, putting these images and feelings directly into your readers, as if we are not just reading this, but are actually there and sharing in everything; the bliss, but also the sorrow, the heartache and every other emotion these two wonderful mares go through.
This was an amazing chapter, and I take off my hat for you. At the same time, I am looking forward to the next meeting between Luna and Twilight, as the events of last chapter still are unresolved and I would love to see them make peace again. As a side note, I am also hoping for some interaction between Celestia and Twilight. It's surprisingly hard to find stories that give these two a moment. Just a moment, no drama, no lessons, no love soap opera, no accusations or dark evil secrets; just a moment of tenderness, be it as friends, mother and daughter-ish, or lovers. You have such skill with painting scenes and emotions, that I'm certain a simple Twilestia 'moment' written by you, regardless of its nature (romantic, purely friendly, familial) would be nothing short of wonderful.
Keep up the amazing work.
I love how stupidly in love these two are.
I'm assuming since the sisters need more support Twilight is to play the part if she joins their... herd? Would be the word?
4886390
If you keep this up I'm liable to change my name to 'the Emperor' for the ego your giving me.
As to your hopes and dreams...
There will be some Twilestia friendshipping in the not too distant future, about three chapters away.
I covered the make up as much as I intend to here. There was a bit that implied an apology during the dream and a mention of a subsequent visit involving Tiberius and Owlowicious. However, you can expect both to be a little guarded (probably isn't the right word) in the upcoming chapter. The issue came down to moving things forward and the scene having little else to add beyond two ponies muttering apologies.
Thank you for your love and support, it makes all the difference in the world.
[addendum] I've had very little luck finding other such stories. Besides 'Who Rules', are there any you can recommend?
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All in good time.
4886766 Damn it River!
One minor error.
Right at the end, the word Luna is split in half, and a line break runs right through it, as it does above. Removing that break and the resulting carriage returns (The enters, for those who don't know its proper term) will fix the issue.
4886766
I'm not sure what you mean by other such stories. Do you mean princest, Twilestia or all three together?
I know of the 'Who Rules' series, and am willing to give my favorites a look-see (total count: 1948 as of time of posting) and see if i can find what it is you're asking about. Chances are, if it involves any of these three, I've given it at least a cursory glance.
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I know exactly what happened and when it happened... that's what I get for not doing a quick check just before posting.
I'm looking for other Lunestia stories that have, you know, emotional weight, where the sisters are actually in love.
Man it's really good so far, wow the conflict is getting crazier by the minute. Can't wait for the next chapter.
4886766 you sir get a for the Doctor Who reference.
4887549
Ah, if it were Twiluna or Twilestia, I could easily nick half a dozen to two dozen easily. Lunestia... not so much. You're already aware of the 'Who Rules?' series, so that one's knocked off my list.
That leaves maybe four stories, if I can find them.
'Rise of Sunbutt the Awesome' has Lunestia, but Celly's not home in her mind. 'Frank' the human is, so that probably doesn't count.
'Sisterly Love' isn't a clopfic, much to my surprise. It's a good warm fluffy moment between the two, and is a one-shot. I'm not sure if this is what you're asking for, but I feel it's better to include everything that might fit, rather than leave out something you might have been looking for.
'Eternally Loved' by NeonEclipse (Not linking because mature and against rules) is a clopfic oneshot-turned-twoshot. The second chapter is more about feelings and the relationship itself, not really anything else. I rather liked it.
That's about it that I can find. There are a number of old-and-truly-dead (circa mid-late 2012 last update) fics that would have beefed up this list greatly... but they never really stood a chance, and that saddens me greatly.
Even as many stories as I've read, a serious story about the pairing is rare. I can only really think of your stories, Who Rules? and Rise of Sunbutt. All the rest are either just fluffy one shots, which while adorable, aren't exactly serious or lengthy enough. Or they're princest sex for princest sex.
Edit- Forgot the obvious one in the final paragraph.
4889775
That pretty much sums up what I've found. There are a few decent clops... but none really delve into them as a real couple. 'Diary of the Mare in the Moon' kinda sorta has it, but it's not really a romance. 'Eternally Loved' was good. 'A Finer Vintage' is on my read later list, but I'm not sure where it takes things (rated teen as it is).
I appreciate your help.
4889966
No problem.
'A Finer Vintage' was a nice little shot. Was much like 'Eternally Loved', just with a different starting premise and no (actual) clop. There is... one other story I've found, but it's long dead. Moreso than the usual kind of long dead. It's called 'Luna's Plight', and it's on FF.net, not here. The story was very promising when I found it, and since then I still see if the author's come back to update it every couple months. Still no luck, but them's the breaks.
4886390
What he said.
This is one of those rare stories that I wish I could give a higher mark to than just a thumbs up and a favorite. Wow.
Friendshipping is all and well, but... TwiLunEstia? Please? @.@ You are one of the few who actually could make it work. Would be so amazing if you did
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That line was too awesome.
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I agree. This author could pull it off wonderfully. They've already built a strong foundation for it.
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But then what would I do with all these feels I just ordered?
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You could always get a refund, or send it to Pinkie Pie to bake their anniversary cake. I hear she's great at cooking feels into her treats .
That and I'm not saying there can't be some starting friction [good drama [well played] => good tension => Good TwiLunEstia]. After all Twilight could work well with either Luna or Celestia, at the moment. And I'm sure she could pull off all three with plenty of feels. Although who she goes for first, and the other's reaction is a good form of drama / tension between all parties.
FINALLY!!! Someone with a proper understanding of archaic middle English! You have won infinite respect from me!
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Thou dost praise too much.
4971211 shh, just take the praise while it's there.
But really, it is refreshing to see it done properly.
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