Twilight's appreciation for the beauty of the night sky has only increased with Luna's return, especially after they meet to discuss her latest addition. One meeting becomes two, becomes a regular outing, it's no wonder they would grow
4989250 I can probably count on the second happening, but unless Twilight both becomes part of a herd with the sisters and is submissive, I sincerely doubt we'll see domineering Luna.
She topped all of once, not counting the dream scene because Celestia was surprised by Luna being real there, and the second time Celestia allowed her to top.
Not exactly a stellar record, but, correct me if I'm wrong.
4989534 Not saying you're wrong or right, but you're using the wrong data set. With only three sex scenes, their relationship dynamic would provide a far more accurate information.
Twilight surfaced from her reverie enough to discover that Princess Platinum was confronting the giant star crab a second time, now armed with an ancient magical weapon of some description.
I feel like I have to apologise. I know you're used to me writing comments of at least a page in length, but I fear I have preciously little to add this time around. I can only praise you for capturing the Princesses' characters so much before it becomes repetitive, and you've heard me say it before. This was just another all-around nice chapter, absolutely soaked in your usual excellence. I will spare a moment to say that I really like how Twilight and Luna's relationship is developing. It feels very natural and believable, and flows very well. It doesn't feel like it's developing too fast or too slow, which is very nice.
I'm sorry I don't have more to say, but I really did enjoy this chapter. It was very sweet and made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
4989720 As did I! A very cleverly hidden meme there, if there ever was one!
4990440 I didn't love her when I met her, not at all in any way. I didn't love her as we chatted, nor as we met day by day. I didn't love the way she sounded, nor color of her hair. I didn't love smell of roses that swayed and danced and filled the air. I did not love her, don't you see. For love is like an old oak tree, and I was but a seed.
(It's six am from the long way round... I have no idea.)
4995736 I understand what you're saying, but... According to Dictionary.com: Ether (linked from Aether): is a hypothetical substance supposed to occupy all space, postulated to account for the propagation of electromagnetic radiation through space. Which is close enough to what magic may or may not be for my purposes. Unless you are saying that you didn't immediately know to what I was referring, I don't see it as an issue worth addressing.
Besides having an unreasonable dislike of the term 'mana', it lacks an Italian equivalent and 'Canto Mana' just doesn't have the same ring to it. If I really wanted to put effort into it, I could explain it as being similar to why we still call atoms 'atoms' even though it is completely wrong by its definition.
For the purpose of this fic, and any subsequent stories, aether = 'magic stuff'
Actually if you think about it there were three words for what Magic was made from in ancient times. Yes you have Aether [the 5th Element [Earth, Air. Fire, Water, Aether]], you also have Quintessence which is basically Classical / Medieval Era name for Aether [well the latinized version of the greek term which Aether originated from]. Then of course you have Qi [Chi, or the hindu term Prana], which is also basically the same thing, an intrinsic energy that connects. flows through, and is part of all things.
So yeah Aether totally works. And tapping into it/manipulating it/ working with it in this fic is logical enough. Btw. This was a nice chapter in the beginning, and an interesting one in the end. Although I'm a little sad that Celestia's worries are looking like they're about to nip her in the flanks.
It becomes a usual practice to fall for incomplete romantic stories... Why are those characters so lifelike?.. So another reader is wainting for the next chapter.
Egotistical answer: Because I am that awesome. Real answer: Because I care about them. Honest answer: Far too many hours spent trying to make sure that they are.
Well, the first answer, in a sense, is given by your nickname (or should I say "title"), the second by your blogposts, and the third, well.. by the text itself?)
So this moonshine is going to be a prefect distilled one).. Just as I said, waiting for another bottleanother cmall glass to "dehydrate" my tears the blessed continuation)
Twilight surfaced from her reverie enough to discover that Princess Platinum was confronting the giant star crab a second time, now armed with an ancient magical weapon of some description. Not that she cared as Luna was the star of the show far more than Princess Platinum.
Is this a reference to "Rarity fights a giant crab"?
Well. That came out of nowhere.
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Of course, it wouldn't be much of a secret military organization if everyone expected it.
Time to check a few of my fanfiction bingo pieces off!
Moonshine! Check!
Tension of the possibly romantic kind! Check!
Prudish Celestia! Check!
Me reading too much into things! Double Check!!
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All you need now is 'Aggressively domineering Luna', and 'Misunderstanding blown way out of proportion'!
(Prudish? Nah. Cautious, yes.)
4989250 I can probably count on the second happening, but unless Twilight both becomes part of a herd with the sisters and is submissive, I sincerely doubt we'll see domineering Luna.
She topped all of once, not counting the dream scene because Celestia was surprised by Luna being real there, and the second time Celestia allowed her to top.
Not exactly a stellar record, but, correct me if I'm wrong.
Hail Hydra!
4989534
Not saying you're wrong or right, but you're using the wrong data set. With only three sex scenes, their relationship dynamic would provide a far more accurate information.
4989654 I'd still bet with Celestia then, while she isn't comfortable with PDAs she certainly seems to take control when in private.
What with coercing Luna both to teach Twilight and buy a Painting in lieu of an apology, and with her general instigation of relations in general.
I can't really recall Luna doing much leading in this relationship.
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE!
4989007 NOPONY EXPECT THE CELESTIAL INQUISITION!
What did the CMC do this time?
I feel like I have to apologise. I know you're used to me writing comments of at least a page in length, but I fear I have preciously little to add this time around. I can only praise you for capturing the Princesses' characters so much before it becomes repetitive, and you've heard me say it before. This was just another all-around nice chapter, absolutely soaked in your usual excellence. I will spare a moment to say that I really like how Twilight and Luna's relationship is developing. It feels very natural and believable, and flows very well. It doesn't feel like it's developing too fast or too slow, which is very nice.
I'm sorry I don't have more to say, but I really did enjoy this chapter. It was very sweet and made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
4989720
As did I! A very cleverly hidden meme there, if there ever was one!
4989007 NOPONY EXPECTS THE EQUESTRIAN INQUISITION!!!
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4990440
I didn't love her when I met her, not at all in any way.
I didn't love her as we chatted, nor as we met day by day.
I didn't love the way she sounded, nor color of her hair.
I didn't love smell of roses that swayed and danced and filled the air.
I did not love her, don't you see.
For love is like an old oak tree, and I was but a seed.
(It's six am from the long way round... I have no idea.)
Pretty sure you wanted
or
... and someone else already took the Spanish Inquisition joke, so I guess I'll have to search for a new form of cliché humor.
4995736
I understand what you're saying, but...
According to Dictionary.com:
Ether (linked from Aether): is a hypothetical substance supposed to occupy all space, postulated to account for the propagation of electromagnetic radiation through space.
Which is close enough to what magic may or may not be for my purposes. Unless you are saying that you didn't immediately know to what I was referring, I don't see it as an issue worth addressing.
Besides having an unreasonable dislike of the term 'mana', it lacks an Italian equivalent and 'Canto Mana' just doesn't have the same ring to it. If I really wanted to put effort into it, I could explain it as being similar to why we still call atoms 'atoms' even though it is completely wrong by its definition.
For the purpose of this fic, and any subsequent stories, aether = 'magic stuff'
4995861
Actually if you think about it there were three words for what Magic was made from in ancient times. Yes you have Aether [the 5th Element [Earth, Air. Fire, Water, Aether]], you also have Quintessence which is basically Classical / Medieval Era name for Aether [well the latinized version of the greek term which Aether originated from]. Then of course you have Qi [Chi, or the hindu term Prana], which is also basically the same thing, an intrinsic energy that connects. flows through, and is part of all things.
So yeah Aether totally works. And tapping into it/manipulating it/ working with it in this fic is logical enough. Btw. This was a nice chapter in the beginning, and an interesting one in the end. Although I'm a little sad that Celestia's worries are looking like they're about to nip her in the flanks.
It becomes a usual practice to fall for incomplete romantic stories... Why are those characters so lifelike?.. So another reader is wainting for the next chapter.
p.s. Budding relationship -- check.
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Egotistical answer: Because I am that awesome.
Real answer: Because I care about them.
Honest answer: Far too many hours spent trying to make sure that they are.
4989720
That makes three of us.
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cant wait for more :D
so epic ^^
5007463
Well, the first answer, in a sense, is given by your nickname (or should I say "title"), the second by your blogposts, and the third, well.. by the text itself?)
So this moonshine is going to be a prefect distilled one).. Just as I said, waiting for another bottle
another cmall glass to "dehydrate" my tearsthe blessed continuation)Is this a reference to "Rarity fights a giant crab"?