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He may have been an enslaving douchebag, but I still pity that griffon captain.
You seem to have missed a word here. Probably a "were" after "they".
Oh the irony of having the phallus nailed, rather then the phallus nailing.
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I know, right?
4774903 I just worry about when his mind processes what he's just done. That's going to be one powerful realization.
Hah! He got his Dick shot off! Rye's turning into a Badass.
Maybe, just maybe, if your descriptions of the shots become less accurate, the gore tag wouldn´t apply. Personally, with the exception of the captain´s groin shoot and, maybe, the "exposed molars" thing, i don´t consider this chapter gore at all.
Great work, again. Now back to The Chase. No rest for the wicked !!!!
Glory shot! X3
yeah, there's not too much gore, but I think it deserves the gore tag after this chapter. It's probably not a big deal, though.
I see nothing that calls for a gore tag here. Violence, certainly, but not gore
4776076 The image of nails everywhere in that griffon's groin or the pegasus with the molars showing through his cheek or the griffon getting his beak blown off with a pistol blast. None of that seems gory to you?
When the griffon captain said that he wasn't dying, I really hoped for a Monty Python reference. Like Spyglass saying "He will die any second now" to which the griffon retorts "I think I'm getting better" you know, to lighten the mood a little.
I love Rye Mash!
He'll be all: 'that isn't very nice at all'
Insult a lady in front of him and you done screwed, or nailed, as the case may be.
5198029 I believe that in the chase he is affectionately known as the shotgun rapist and he is the great grandfather of Berry Punch and Sour Mash.
He got that lovely nickname because in this story he is apparently going to start teleporting his shotgun behind people and firing it at their nethers
He slid it back into it’s holster
They where right up along side of the other ship now
ripping most of his face off, causing the griffon to gurgle and strangle
1. Its.
2. Were.
3. Uhh... Struggle? I can't picture him gurgling and strangling at the same time. Unless he strangled himself? I'm not sure at all...
...You'd think that with a crew of 50 people, you'd have more than your top three guys going into secure the captain... and that you'd have an actual medic.
Gorey irony~ :D HAHAHAHAA!
Oooooh man, I ship Rye and Velvet so hard. Please let this be a thing!
It must be a thing.
Nice job man, nice job!
And damn Rye... jeesus xD
“I’m not dying,” the griffon cried out in protest. "I'm getting better" and what is it about you and aiming for arses or tater sacks??
4791598 I personally have seen similar gore in a Tarantino Movie, and to be fair I would show that to a 15 year old. I have seen Reanimator and Evil Dead. Now that is gore!
I wonder if this story was inspired by "Stardust" Captain Shakespeare and the Caspertine. It kind of has the same feel, even though the plot is totally different.
And so class, the takeaway here is to never buck with a pony named after hard liquor. Thus endeth the lesson.
It's a pirate story, those are violent and gross by definition.
Rye has a thing about 'Tater Sacks' (and carrots?)
Eugh. My sphincter clenched in sympathy.
*hurk*
And thus the Shotgun Rapist claims his first bedfellow.
That is a vey undignified...and painful way to go out.