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Buggery - no real problem.
Baths - Eww! :)
Well...what...but...when....well again...
Ooooh... I like where this is going.
I do feel Rye's personality has slipped a fair bit faster than expected, truth be told. Going from-dare I say- Posh and 'cultured', to being a little rougher around the edges, yet still very much a gentlecolt, to being okay with throwing around the word 'bugger' in public. I seem to remember a certain unicorn from another story who was rather skittish about things like this.
Maybe I'm just overthinking it a bit, being that the times are different (By a good margin) and other minor details. I actually wasn't expecting the surprise kiss though.. and I must say, it was rather nicely written.
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For all of Piña's distaste towards Starjammer, he's an interesting character. I like 'im.
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Rye adapts quickly. It is part of why Lace Collar liked him so much. He was a common servant who could easily blend in to high society function and pick up on social nuances instantly.
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Also, think back to when he was eating and Bloody Velvet watched him. He clearly wanted to wolf it down and his manners were only a thin veneer.
I don't know if I like Starjammer yet (and no, that has nothing to do with his sexuality, this provides very interesting routes for the story), but this chapter made him interesting at any rate and he has gained my sympathy. We know how Avarice parents can be...
But something about him strokes me the wrong way. He seems a little too careless.
He knew that his parents were outraged by his sexuality, why not run away instead of killing them? He'd get chased either way, but now he has comitted a serious crime. Well, it could be seen as a statement, especially with the slavery part...
Woe Betide sounds like a good donkey name.
I'm sure you'll give your best in the battle for the throne, my dear Miss Betide.
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More about why he did it is coming. Slowly. In pieces. He doesn't talk much, in spite of overwriting his books.
It might take a few hundred thousand words to get all of the details out.
5169122 Who is this Pina you speak of. She's not born for another hundred odd years
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Pina hates his books.
I just suddenly realized that Piña read HIS books. My mind never made the connection...
I like this
I really like this
I really really like this
kudzu
im hooked again
When we met Woe we were like WOAH foalcon shipped separately and by separately we mean nevaaaaaah
that last bit surprised the hell out of me. did not see that coming at all.
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Speak for yourself...
Is this the herd you were speaking of? The one with multiple males? Or was that specifically in The Chase?
4813936 I know that it wasn't christened yet, I was just wondering if it was the same boat.
5169401 what were her reasons for hating them again?
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They're ten thousand pages long.
5171086 i made it this far yeit was a bit graphic but I liked it. I am way behind on the has though.
Aaaand it turns out I forgot to add this to my favorites. That has been rectified.
In any case, some more information about the new crew. This is certainly getting quite interesting. Looking forward to more.
Yay! I really like where this is going finally cought up on the catch!
I think Woe Betide is my new favourite character.
oh cool, they're bi-sexual. I wonder who the girl of the herd is gonna be. If any.
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Oh, there is a mare... I mean, Rye Mash has to have foals so Sour Mash and Berry Punch will come along.
And a typo did indeed rear its ugly head:
One too many 'the's there.
Don't worry Rye, it will all make sense soon when The Catch (the lost chapters) comes everywhere to screens near you XD
Patricide, the killing of one's father.
Matricide, the killing of one's mother.
Fratricide, the killing of one's sibling.
I learnt three new word :3
I did not see this coming... I'm all: WHAT?
5171835 And I only just realized there just who starjammer is. Oh I feel stupid
How long are you planning on making The Catch?
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Hrm, about a million words or so. Still fleshing out notes!
5222630 You are planning on making The Catch be a million words? ...How long are you planning on making The Chase?
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A tiny bit longer.
5222644 So The Chase will be done soonish? Or is a tiny bit millions of words to you?
How old is Rye Mash? Compared to Rising Star?
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Mid teens.
5225228 Alright. (Best Author: kudzuhaiku)
Finally found the time to read this!!
(Parents decided to canvas for furniture for hours...)
This is very interesting, I really look forward to where this'll go.
I'm an open minded guy, I'm fine with gay stuff.
Though that kiss did catch me off guard.
Rye is transitioning from a weak and scared slaved to a badass a little too quickly, in my opinion...
Give Woa a cloak, it'll fit her!
I love stealthy characters.
The guards were too damn lazy to report that? Man, corruption.
Wonder how the place got so much better in The Chase.
That's all I got to say for now...
I'm in 3% battery and I don't want to risk losing this comment.
YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER I KNOW.
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I'm glad this iPad has a thing that can define any word you select!
I'd say the Chase verse improved my vocabulary quite a bit!
5272858 :D
5285520 That's the scene I was talking about. The only part that made me walk away from the computer and come back to finish reading later.
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Hehe. I was starting to get a bit queasy near the end and almost had to take a break before finishing the last few paragraphs too. I did stop there for the night though.
5288604 And now I feel weird cause I just sat through that portion of it and kept going. I'm weird like that.
Strangely, Starjammer is more like my ponification than my OWN OC.
5483346 Hmm, never knew about Genteel being a word. I keep equating that to my local Gintell which is a massage chair brand. Funny how the mind works.
Is Woollen a British variation?
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I don't know... actually. I have always seen it spelt woollen, woolly, etc.
That's a good question.
How old is Rye, because I felt like that was a little bitof pedophelia there
will this go on longer or does the story just end there for this story because I think this would make a good long story if you kept writing it
Did the fates cast some spell on Rye when he was there; because otherwise he's had 3 fates, one random hooker, one street orphan and one runaway aristocrat dude propositioning him in one day.
Not to mention the zebra filly in the slave hold or the one that asked him to marry her though they might have been the same one.