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My major annoyance with this, and the chase, is that I can't click thumbs up once a chapter.
:-)
I think I may have missed it, But what exactly are the Shakes?
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The shivers are a neurological condition certain unicorns have. It is present in The Chase, but isn't a problem any more because of medication. So it is relatively unknown. But this is two hundred years earlier. Cerise is a type three with a neurological condition.
You are going to see a number of unicorns with this problem.
Bloody Velvet is best unicorn.
*is tempted to harass bloody velvet anyway*
*likes females that are dangerous*
I kinda like that she has shakes ... you're describing that really well, I have a brain disease that makes me have movements like that and no one ever really describes things like that well. It's a nice change.
Let's see... Is Cerise's Shakes the same thing that Twilight had in Lesson Zero? I've been wondering that since chapter one.
I kept reading Skeeter's voice in Oliver Wood's voice for some reason too... But I don't know if I'm right because Skeeter's age wasn't really mentioned much.
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Sort of, but much much worse.
Wait a sec... Bloody Velvet is Spyglass' mate, isn't it? Or am I missing an eye?
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First mate and second in command.
NOT a romantic relationship.
4760912 Cool. Those two things just seem similar to me, and since Twilight has a lot of magic and could overload easily.
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It is addressed in The Chase to a great extent. The severe neurosis of the unicorns. Have you read The Chase?
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Oh, ok. Not this kind of mate. My apologies
4760979 Yes, I've been keeping up with The Chase but didn't link it to the neurosis as that was never explained as more than an unfortunate mental occurrence, for some reason the possibility of it affecting the unicorns physically slipped my mind!
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Bucky has also displayed some of the same symptoms but he doesn't have the shivers.
If Cerise could find the sort of calm and tranquillity she needed in her life, much of the symptoms would go away, but not all. I feel okay telling you this because this will never be explicitly made clear in the story.
Yeah, I'm that person.
This might be a typo, although it is a real word.
I think that's: Crewmembers' due to implying more than one pony, I think.
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Mould is spelled right. Google it!
Just like colour.
I am starting to see the correlating blood lines. When Luna addressed it in the Chase it didn't mean much however I now see the mane six blood lines coming to form. Bloody Velvet obviously being twilight ancestor. I am gonna go out on a limb here and say Skeeter is Rainbow Dashs ancestor. And from past comment sections I am aware that there is an Apple on board. It's all very clever you have successfully hooked me for another story. Also I have a question. How would a pony or other creature wield guns without magic? In the story Bloody Velvet said she got it from Griffons
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Griffon claws... remarkably like fingers. And minotaurs have hands.
Common ponies cannot wield guns.
Manipulation shoes exist at this point, but they don't work very well and are expensive.
Is this airship 'The Scorned Mare'?
At first I was like "I'd ship Rye Mash and Bloddy Velvet" and thought of a name. The first two words I thought of: "Bloody Mash". Then I was like: "On second thought, nevermind."
You keep mentioning to read The Chase, isn't this a prequel? Aren't we supposed to read this first? If not then I need to read The Chase.
5152796 While neither story is complete this story was made for a look into the far past of the Chase-verse.
I would recommend reading both at the same time. Also remember a few things within the stories.
1. Point out typos.
2. The Chase-verse is highly influenced by the readers comments if you have an idea about the story throw it in the comment section and you might be surprised at what happens.
3. If you can't stand blood or gore then don't even read the stories you'll likely quit halfway through.
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probably not the wood on this ship would have probably decayed by the time Bucky got it. Also it definitely hasn't been christened the Scorned Mare until Bucky gets it.
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The Chase is not that gory... most of the time. The only scene that gave me a hard time was when Bucky got "patched up" after meeting his shadow-wolf neighbors for the first time. I suppose Dinky's and Harper's births might be a bit too much for some people as well.
He chewed thoughtfully as his chunk of black bread
1. On. Or is At a better one? Hmm... Personally, I think it's the former.
Hmmm, how many generations go by in two hundred years? For unicorn nobles, I mean.
You know, I really like Bloody Velvet, she seems nice. Yeah she's a bit twitchy and what have ya, but she seems nice 8'D
Hehehe, I love this.
Nice job, nice job!
Rye has a buddy!
"MAH TATER SACK". If reincarnation exists I wonder if that's the same guy. I'd haveta ask ash I guess :p
? = should there be a 'me' in there?
So I am wondering...what is the relation of Violet Velvet to Bloody Velvet? I mean she DOES take after her distant ancestor a LOT more than Twilight.