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The meeting took place in shabby, run down rowhouse with ratty furniture.
in a shabby
“I get the feeling that this is going to be an profitable exchange.”
be a profitable Not sure on this one since it's dialogue.
But I guess we don’t have a leader and we don’t really know about each other so that way if some of get captured, we don’t have much to say.” some of us get
Trottingham orphans, they will rob you, just like the typos.
6097189 Missed two.
almost cramped,
thethe Broker’s bodyguard’sjust talking about serving aboard an airship, where you
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Didnt Al Capogn say something about a kind word and a gun once?
Woe is adorable as always. Seems spyglass has interesting arrangement.
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That's the implication that was intended.
It's heartbreaking.
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Because, they are teasing him and they know that Rye won't actually do anything.
I mean, he did resist the charms of Clotho the earth pony.
I've had this strange idea that Woe Betide had an identical twin sister who was also left in Tradewinds but they got split up fairly early on. neither of them saw themselves in a mirror very often so neither of them recognized each other as being their double, and since they didn't travel around together everyone else thought it was just one filly they were seeing twice as often as the others.
Woe Betide got named by the storekeeper before her sister had a name; but then after she'd started using that name, people who knew her met her sister and called her by that name, so both of them go by the name of Woe Betide.
Those two would get into so much mischief if they ever found each other.
Fascinating. I'm not sure how much good they can do or how much better they make the future, but it will be fun to see them struggle. If nothing else, several members of the crew are remembered by history.
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I'm afraid Rye Mash doesn't stay so sweet and innocent if you consider Berry's words from The Chase.
Hehehee, I wonder what will happen next chapter? Awesomely done, awesomely done!
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He doesn't stay sweet, but considering that Celestia speaks fondly of him in "The Chase" he stays, Fussy, Well-Mannered, A Consummate Tea Drinker, & Determined to do the right thing
6103839 I vaguely remember this conversation taking place, but I don't remember what Berry said. Do you happen to remember the chapter it happened in, or have a quote handy?
That apostrophe in "bodyguard's" looks a bit out place to me.