I read more than what I draw and draw more than what I write.
You are Sword Sweat, an honorary keeper of harmony. One of seven alicorns during your time.
Together with the Regents of Harmony you embark on your final mission. To contain a primal and destructive force plaguing your land in the sturdiest vessel you know.
Yourself.
Written for Obselescence's The Most Dangerous Game - Contest.
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The tense inconsistency is awfully distracting. Well, for me, at least. Pick present or past and stick with it.
Aside from that, not bad at all. A nice bit of tragedy and worldbuilding. Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks.
I'll get to work on picking a tense to stick with.
Neat and weird.