thanks for adding a new chapter! also my computer at home broke.

*Internal rage about Fawks and the Wanderer being in the same fucking town and not seeing or hearing of the other increases tenfold*

I bought my ticket
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Fallout 4 will be the Sh*T, just saying I'm hoping I can get a full week off just to play it. Though what'll be fun is modding the game for deathclaw ally support.

6474594 That was literally my exact same thought when I finished the chapter.

'She doesn't fear me... these little ponies don't fear me... No screams, no threats... no killing... have I found...'

Not going to lie, I kind of expected Fawkes to randomly break out in glee to yell this at the top of his enhanced lungs.

Also, I'm not trying to get to hyped about Fallout 4. But it's sooo difficult.

More... I demand more! Write until your fingers are numb and your keyboard breaks, the click clack of the keys driving you insane!

Anyway, I really enjoying this story, and can't wait for sht to hit the fan. Well done!

And concerning Fallout 4, to quote my favorite sayain:cdn.meme.am/instances/500x/54910691.jpg

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I'm the Author, and I don't ship it.

I'm sad. I don't have next gen and it only for next gen. And I won't have enough money to get one anytime soon.

As for the story awesome chapter.

Your going to get the dog in fallout 4 aren't you?

You lucky bastard, I have everything for a fallout costume except a pipboy, didn't manage to snag one when it went on sale.

I don't know why, but having Fawkes meet the Crusaders is so freakin' cute. They're characterized so well too! It's that gentle giant trope, and I love it to death. Also, seeing a lot of Ponies give Sweetie extra care is nice, although intentionally annoying. Kids are hard to read, and it makes me wonder if what Sweetie went through will make her more aggressive. It'll be interesting to see her develope. Then again, I have a feeling a lot of Ponies are going to see some bad stuff. So exciting.

Dogmeat's bath was surprisingly enjoyable. Just to see some things from his view puts things in perspective. One line in particular stuck with me, "he kills what I can't". It just showed so much of their relationship, and I'm really glad Fluttershy sees that bond. Makes me feel like she won't judge Jason to bad when she sees him do THINGS, you all know what I'm talking about.

Also cool to see Jason get caught up with the Elements of Harmony, history wise. And get more details of his new job. Wonder how that'll branch out.

Only criticism is it needs more Applejack! Though that's more of a personal want then something that needs to change. Looking forward, as always, to the next chapter!

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>no Applejack
0/10
Rewrite the chapter f^ckwit!

... wait...

6474837 Hmm... Dragonman461xThemexininja
I ship it, and I'm a fan. So it is now fanon.

6476579
Can you send me a thing of your OC? I think you just earned a death scene cameo.

banished her younger sister to the surface of the moon for a thousand years.

Wrong. Luna wasn't banished to the SURFACE of the moon, she was banished TO THE MOON.

She became part of the moon, that's why her face is on it.

I still don't like seeing ponies swear. My headcanon is that they know swear words, but they've fallen to disuse over the years, merely a memory at this point.

Sold an item on the Steam community market for $75 and used the funds to pre order Fallout 4

"I've already secured a Pip-Boy edition on Amazon"

Look man, be really careful with Amazon and this pre-order. Over on the Fallout subreddit (reddit.com/r/fallout) there are stories of people's pre-orders getting cancelled by Amazon themselves. You don't even get the money back, just a cancelled order that cannot be re-instated.

I've already secured a Pip-Boy edition on Amazon, and I'll be going to PAX as my next official story character, so I'll try to keep you posted with it!

GOD DANG IT!!!! IM NOT GETTING ONE!

You know, the more you talk about canon events, the more the whole "very human-like violence" thing looks out of place. You should try and avoid that.

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Good point. I'll keep that in mind, thanks.

I remember you saying something about the courier being in one of your stories, a hint maybe?
Also if you need further information about some of the weapon of 3 or New Vegas or hell maybe 4 when it come out.(the hype is real)

Fallout 4 might be the first time I'm actually able to play as an evil, maybe even sociopathic character.
I figure a psyche broken by seeing everything and everyone he loved consumed in atomic fire might work.

Or I might just have flashbacks to Dead Money and "Let go...Begin again"

6476583 I can describe him to you. a crystal ball with legs. Whenever someone looks into him he shows the best insult possible for that individual. Either that or he was pretty much that one guy you have permission from me to use, what was his name? Oh yeah, Michael McDoesn'tExist.

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Loud and proud. Lasers all the way!

6479818
Oh that one guy who can stop me.

Lucky bastard, getting a Pipboy...no monies, sadly.
Still, I'm happy for you.

Lucky you, getting a PipBoy. They all sold out before I even knew about them.

6476788
This isn't canon MLP.
It's completely up to the author to decide whether Luna was banished to the surface of the moon or if she was swallowed up by it or whatever.

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That rule only applies if the story is tagged "Alternate Universe", which it is not, therefore everything up to a point is canon, including Luna's banishment.

The author cannot change past "Canon Universe" events.

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Luckily, the author does not share your headcanon.

6490823
It's not headcanon.

I loathe quoting the wikia, but:

The elder sister reluctantly harnessed the power of the Elements of Harmony and "banished her permanently in the moon,"

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IN THE MOON

And three stories caught up! Whoohoo! on a roll! Also... my frinds and I are ALL getting Fallout 4. Because we NEED to. Too long since a good one came out. So even if it doesn't live up to the hype, it will likely be an excellent game. Bethesda knows what they are doing and with skyrim they only got better as far as combat and character/creature design. This will likely be a step up... if they can COMPLETELY skip past the whole ultra lag crap they made Skyrim do.

6492123
Quote an episode. Wikia is not official.

There was a Season 5 hype train.

I say Fallout 4 Hype Vertabird!

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Technically I am quoting the episode, that quote from the wikia is quoting the episode.

Also, I know, like I said, I hate taking stuff from sites like wikia and wikipedia as it's edited by the public.

6480980 I've always gone stealth. I try to play games how I'd act IRL, and I'm no fan of pain.

My body is ready for FO4

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

when is the next chapter coming out?

6496892 I learned something a few years ago that gives strong evidence that 'edited by the public' does not equal ' wrong' or 'inaccurate' when things have settled down on a given page.

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I didn't say it was wrong or inaccurate. If anything, it's simply unreliable.

6582701 I was reading this readers digest magazine once for whatever reason. I came across this article about a guy who had a services in which college students could pay him to write their papers. It went something like $2000 dollars per assignment but that's not important. What's important is that the source he used almost exclusively was Wikipedia and simply used the sources listed on Wikipedia as his own. He had completed several degrees worth of assignments before he stopped. I realized that if this was true, then Wikipedia's features made to improve reliability must be damn effective. The occasional 'this thing here has no source cited' makes it easy to spot items that may not be accurate.

Ugh, well there's the reasoning behind my opinion. Do as you will with it.

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WHERE THE FUCKING HELL CAN I BUY THOSE TRAIN TICKETS!!!!!
(It just made my day.)

We got about 4 days left. Think you can release the next chapter before Fallout 4 drops?

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I think I'll have out 3 more chapters before Bethesda gets out the Mods for console.

welllll i want more

6744722 You sell everything? I keep everything. Only selling the third and above duplicate of items. I have to collect everything. There was nothing left in the Capital Wasteland to kill so I brought my character over the the Mohave. I recommend the Tale of Two Wastelands mod.

6745015 god that would help being able to play in dc and the mojave

6746228 When I killed everything in the Wasteland and that big, empty landscape felt just a bit more empty, it was time to move on to the desert. I especially like how leveling to max is pretty easy unless you choose an option at the start to make leveling up for later levels near impossible. It's nice being the unstoppable Vault Dwelling Courier.

this is a nice story can't wait for more