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..... Okay .... *cough* well, It was unexpected
Yay! Updates!
I want a sappy reunion scene with Fawkes and the Wanderer.
Fawkes bursts out of the tree-line, Wanderer sees him, the two rush at each other, with everypony else thinking they're about to do battle, when they tackle each other and start bro-hugging.
Fuck with some heads!
Well, that was new.
Well at least we know why she act like that, now Im curious of dogmeat POV.
Well, that bit about the mare in estrus was gratuitous porn. I've yet to see the relevance of it to the storyline.
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Just a side character that Jason interacted with. Sorry about that.
More development towards the main story will come in next chapter.
UNEXPECTED! UNEXPECTED!
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5143488 As it is, it's just a gag in bad taste. Unless you want to just leave cheap crowd-attracting content just to up your views and give your pen name an unpleasant and permanent tarnish, you should implement that into the plot (something like Jason's susceptibility to pheromones) or remove it altogether if you really are sorry.
5143555
This is the most gratuitous portion of porn screen ever in the history of everything.
John, get off my laptop!
5143563 lol.
agreed?
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How do you figure out the most vital parts of the series so easily!?
Yes, he has several weaknesses that are going to be introduced through scenes like this, such as pheromones and several other drugs and stimuli.
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Read my comments with Jack Kellar. It's vital to the plot.
5143577 interesting...
ah can't await for the meeting of jason and fawkes
Oh great, effect by mare. this is gonna be good.
5143454
I had the same idea too! You have to do a reunion like that Dragonman it would be too cool!
I wonder how AJ is gonna react when she finds her baby sister with a giant green mutant?
5144285 ...For the umpteenth million time,Fawkes is supposed to be Yellow.
5143454 and we need some sort of music in the background as the two run in slow motion, repeatedly calling out eachother's names before embracing
5143577 I have a question. Why didn't Fawkes change into something?
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If I had to hazard a guess, it's because of the FEV, and the fact that magic appears to be similar to radiation and Fawkes, as a supermutant, is immune to radiation. Just my two cents though.
5145237
It will be explained in a future chapter.
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5145410 Sooooo, her explanation then.
5145433
Nope.
Say, anyone remember the fact that there was an army of Enclave that was supposed to invade the Wasteland? I wonder what happened to them?
5145100
Butchception?
5144851 Would this be perfect?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Except with more gunfire and lasers~!
5145588 GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm still waiting for tasked to revel him self and for the enclave to show them selves
5143454 that would be awesome.
5145237 because he already was changed into something? Maybe. Hypothesis: FEV interferes with what ever magic changed the Wanderer. It would explain why his Solar Powered growths are still there. Since it requires massive exposure to cause a human to turn into a Super Mutant the magic didnt change that. so Fawkes is still Fawkes.
5145588 yeeeeeeeeessss
5145570 5145588
Nah this one is better
I know not likely but dang I want to see him and a thestral together, even if it is only temporary... Maybe Dusk Wind to make things funnier
The Thestral Mare uses Pheremones!
It's Super Effective!
The Wanderer is Stunned!
I'm half expecting a Clop side-fic to this now.
MORE! Please! PLEASE MORE!
I mean... if you are ok with it...
well still time
anyway I want to see how Dusk wind reacts to falkes
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I am, and there shall be.
5154905 yay!
5143895 I love it when the mare teases, and delivers some power punching pheromones, by flicking her tail across the snout of the one she tries to affect.
It really makes to whole scene seem like "fishing" for affection you know.
She has a rod with a bait and sends it flying for the target, and he bites on it because the smell is to damn effective, then she hauls in her catch by turning her backside in front of him.
Poor colt stood no chance.
There is one other thing that bothers during that scene though. When a mare can affect a stallion that way, he seriously is gonna get some boner issues, it's unavoidable. But alas the author forgot to mention something like that when describing the Wanderer's 'haze'. I mean the moist folds were already mentioned, so why not mention his bodily reaction to this? Those pheromones she delivers are practically drug or 'lust enhancers', he would need to have a similar bodily reaction compared to hers as well, since he did become hazy and felt the effects kick in.
Something like this should suffice, read please, the green lines are what I would add to clarify this reaction:
That would suffice. At least then it would be mentioned, that this whole spectacle with the tail, the scent and pheromones, plus the amazing view at her moist private parts, got an equal reaction out of him concerning his 'reproductive equipment'.
Besides, while we human guys don't have such a 'hiding place' for our 'docking system', something as large as stallion's, overall proportionally compared to a Man's, literally sliding and stretching out of a sack that served as a storage room for it, just has to be noticeable for at least it's owner.
If he gets affected by her pheromones, plus gets a good look at her rear, there is no way that would not happen in an instant, even if just slowly, but noticeable for him nonetheless.
5158885 Wow...Thank for info mate.
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I never said that he was "turned on" by her pheromones.
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Pretty sure those are signs of getting horny, especially since the mare was in a 'heat-like' condition (Star Buck said it) implying that she releases pheromones in her fluids from where the mating happens, no? Her folds where moist after all, you wrote that in his observation, and some of that moistness is sure to get stuck on her tail.
Why would he feel hazy and blood pumped if he wasn't affected by pheromones? Just because she flicked him with her tail then? Big deal. I flick my feather duster at my nose and all that happens is me sneezing.
Good sir, if you mention the mare being in an estrus like state (according to Star Buck) and then write something like: "sending a scent into his breath that pounded his senses", it's easy to come to the conclusion, "O.k, he got swayed by her pheromones then" especially when she swiped him with her tail in the face, and we all know where that hairy tail usually hangs downwards, and area which was described as 'moist folds'.
He sure didn't smell her "citrus mane shampoo." right? That doesn't make him hazy and increases blood pressure in an instant, not to mention when an alternative explanation, her moist area so visually described, was openly presented.
And then again, pheromones are meant to lure and allure and erect. 'Lust enhancers' may be the right word, so why wouldn't his johnny react to her 'smell' if she already presented herself in a wet and lusty state to him?
I don't push for clop or saucy scenes, I'm just saying logically, since he was so easily influenced by her 'smell' aka 'pheromones', that an automatic reaction of his 'hidden joystick' should have naturally happened by itself, without him thinking much about anything related to it of course.
If you get drugged, the drug influences you, no matter if you want or not.
his mind says Nope!
But His lower bodily department disagrees, when influnced by her 'smell', which really soudns like pheromones when combined with the fact that her superior yelled at her for not withstanding her artificial estrus condition.
All I suggested considering this whole thing, was to add at least one line to show that he had a more physically exposed reaction, against his will mind you, when confronted with a pheromone sprouting mare presenting her wet private parts to him:
He suddenly became very aware that something stiff was steadily sneaking out of it's hiding place, right below his barrel.
Then when he was aware of his subtle reaction, this happens:
"As the shock of that realization hit him, Jason quickly stepped back and tripped[...]"
I think it fits the circumstances, and nothing seriously happened since he would have been still shocked and proceeded to trip anyway.
Just a suggestion.
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Over the next few chapters, I'll explain why it wasn't so much as turning him on as it was his mind/body fighting inside, since, you know, he's now in a different body, and I'll get to explaining that soon. Next chapter's up in a few hours, just give me some time.
*Cleveland's voice* Aw thats just nasty
5145437 and do you remember FUCK YOU
love you
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Alt Theory: There is no proper analogue to change him into that exists on the planet.
5145437
Yaknow, despite all my gametime playing Fallout 3, I never DID find that army, not even in the later DLC. If they truly had a proper army noone would've been able to stop them at all.
Who gave them directions to Albuquerque instead?