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YAY~! Update! Also the mare is Moondancer. IT was kinda obvious, although I might ask...What is Starlight Glimmer role into this story?
I died.
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You'll find out soon~.
6287321 I do not like that reply somehow...I have a feeling Glimmer will be either a enemy of the Wander and die...or possibly be his companion somehow.
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Glimmer will NOT be a companion.
Not in any dimension.
6287366 Okay...so she's a dead mare. Good to know.
I cant wait for the next chapter. This one awesome. And I can't wait to see what happens with Moondancers character development.
Negative comments? Such as, "I hate you and I hope you rot in the hole I've sent you to die in!" ?
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Um, o-okay...
6287284 Moon-moon dancer
Our safety phrase is 'Police Brutality'.
6287597 NUUUUUUU You MONSTER
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Which part of that should have been directed towards me? I'm confused.
But anyways, you know what to do... Just don't be to rough on me, please?
Moondancer what gave it way.
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Why is no one talking about the Enclave?
6287754 Can we at least use lube first? >//<
Twilight clone.
6287757 why no one talk about Enclave. because everyone who play fallout 3 know that they are been wiped out
if you want everyone to talk about Enclave. you may want to give them something like liberty prime. but as the Enclave prime.
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What do you think it's shipping? Flashlights?
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I think of her as a good parallel.
6287817 Nice.
But I'm pretty sure they've got those too.
I would put up a picture of both Twilight and Flash to reinforce the pun, but eh.
Alright, I've gone far too long without making this joke:
So colonel autumn is a pony now?
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Yes.
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No, she's not dead, just... looking for employment.
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A number of people did and commented on it, yes.
I loved that series, but seriously, how does a dude with a knife in leather armor beat a BoS Paladin with a Super Sledge?
Starlight Glimmer... maybe a possible enemy combatant for Jason? And Colonel Autumn, as well.
Shit.
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You want a spoiler?
6289601 So tempting.... no, I would rather wait.
6289446 Oh...she's probably with the enclave by now.
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Season 5 hasn't started in the story yet, shhhh!!!!
The only stoic and well-studied mare with pink magic that's actually canon is Moondancer. Seems obvious that she'd achieve this position in the government.
Though I gotta call shenanigans on the powered armor for the Dogs. No way Autumn would have the industrial capabilities to mass-produce that stuff.
I got to ask how come Fawkes is the only one that wasn't ponyfied coming to this world? Also just how long was that Enclave guy here to actually make power armor? He had to have brought some with him and a few scientists to make it as I can't really see him being able to make any of that stuff let alone modifying it himself so there has to be other members of the Enclave support staff at least maybe a few other soldiers as officers for this new army.
Yeah looks like Moondancer is coming into the story in a new way so that should be interesting.
I do wonder, why did you go through all the trouble of him moving in with Twilight and making a big deal with the security of his stuff and then he just leaves to a less secure place? I really didn't get his reasoning it just seemed like you changed your mind and forced the story to go that way as it didn't really feel like a natural decision.
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He doesn't. The armor isn't being made.
6318218 Don't tell me the Enclave armors came with him from the Wasteland, conveniently tailored to fit diamond dogs. I won't buy that contrivance.
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No, he lets the dogs weld the armors apart and reshape them, plus they have to cut the torso out since the rest of the armor doesn't fit any of the dogs.
6318305 A'ight, I can get that.
But how did they get there with him from the Wasteland, especially in numbers? He couldn't have been wearing more than one, and that is if you adapt the FO3's story so that he isn't derping around in a pathetic officer uniform when his base is under attack by the single most dangerous mofo in the Thirteen Colonies area.
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Remember the teleporter?
How the Wanderer got to Equestria?
6325517 Actually, I didn't. In the 21 chapters past the first, it was never so much as alluded to, so I just forgot how he got there.
All the same, I trust you to write your explanations into the story itself, yes?
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It's just as M. Bison said:
Didn't Colonel Autumn die at the end?
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Not if you have perfect Speech.
6337905 Oh, yeah! My mistake.
Why did it take me so long to get a review for this chapter? Heck if I know, but I'm going to keep typing anyway!
Lot's of things to say here! I love the small reputation the Lone Wanderer is gaining, biology wise. So much crap in one stallion! Speaking of which, I believe I know the mare that got all that information. I'll just slip on this spoiler tag and say it's Discord! Na, Moon Dancer. And if I'm totally off base, then someone can slap my genitals, as it were. Now, I fear I have made a grave mistake. Moving on! I love how Fawkes is taking the Pony world well, and coming into the Friendship Castle - or whatever the hell it's called. I like to think he and Twilight would be good friends, both seekers of knowledge and all that. I'm still anticipating the climax when the Lone Wanderer and Fawkes reunite, that'll be awesome! Just past that was with Sweetie Belle and Rarity. Just simply going along with mental trama is a great way to gander some interest in the story. It shows that what happened wasn't just something that happened, but something that had impact on a lot of characters. Seeing how more characters react to Sweetie Belle - as well as Sweeite Belle herself - at the kidnapping will be a thrill to read. Really looking forward to that.
And now the bad guys get more time. Boo (at the bad guys, not them coming in!) Good ol' Coronel Autumn yukking it up with Diamond Dogs, and now Griffins as well! Makes me wonder if Gilda will make an appearance, but seeing that statue again makes me quiver in excitement. QUIVER. The Lone Wanderer has a lot on his plate. This chapter, like some of the previous ones, is building up to some spectacular moments: more battles, a major reunion between friends, and the works! I do hope there's more interaction between the Lone Wanderer and others of the Mane 6. I really like those. Oh! Or perhaps what they think of him! Maybe just small tidbits like Rarity and Fluttershy's weekly spa treatment (that actually wouldn't be a bad idea).
Overall, still amazing! As much as the big stuff is great, these kind of chapters make those big moments even bigger and greater! (I'm making sense, right?) Keep it up, my good sir!
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It's comments like these that really make my day.
when will you add a new chapter? I loved it !
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Very soon.
6437318 YES!