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FalloutFilly


I'm very sorry at the incredible lack of updates, I have some personal stuff going on and getting my PC back to normal, so updates will be extremely scarce. I deeply apologize for this.

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(Check bottom for title translation.) In this alternate world Shining Armour was KIA in the line of duty before the Changeling attack. Cadence turns to an old friend from school, ThunderShock (My OC, usually called Thunder). After trying to move on from Shining she decides it would be best for her to marry Thunder, after talking to the other Princesses they thought it would also be the best thing to do. Eventually Thunder takes over command as the Equestrian Military Commander. NOTE: It's supposed to be more of a romance, less of a drama, given that statement Cadence will get over Shining rather quickly, faster than normal at least.

I know a lot of people don't like Alicorn OCs because how ridiculous they look and I agree, but I tried to make him as canon looking as possible. Nothing like King Sombra crazy, almost as if Luna were a male, that's where I got most of the ideas. While I'm on this topic I want to mention the Shining Armour was an Alicorn as well, there are 3-4 male Alicorns including Shining and Thunder, but the other ones probably won't be mentioned.

This my tribute to season 4 and, of course, Mi Amoré Cadenza and Shining Armour, also Memorial Day 2014, that's when I started writing this. NOTE: The title (Cadenza ci ama, Tuoni ci protegge) is Italian, it's translated to Cadence loves us, Thunder protects us.

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4486918 I put that in so people wouldn't be like "You idiot OC why don't you go f*** yourself" or something that effect.

4486936 That's just the way I interpret it, I have seen a lot of that, on this site as well as others. Also, people go ape-s*** over Alicorn OCs because people mostly make them majorly OP and all 'Do as I say or be sent to the sun." attitude.

4487102 Well in one of the author's note sections I did mention that, I know it was a rather fast transition, but that's the story, don't like it, don't read it, simple as that.

4487139 Yes, and it is appreciated, but make sure you fully read the description and notes before mentioning something. For instance, the bottom of the first paragraph: "NOTE: It's supposed to be more of a romance, less of a drama, given that statement Cadence will get over Shining rather quickly, faster than normal at least." I'm not mad, sorry if I came off that way.

4487188 Well that was my original intention, but I have terrible ADD so I got sidetracked and forgot, I've been meaning to do that once I got a good way to do it and got the time to.

4487212 I have been looking for someone, but no one wants to.

4488343 I have, but I want a person who'll do with just me and vice versa, not someone who does it commercially

4488519 I know it's not actually commercial, I just couldn't get the right word. And I want a personal one so they know my ideas and styles and don't f*** anything up.

4488571 Probably both, but if I ask any of my friends to edit this stuff, they will die of laughter because I'm southern as well are they. Point being if someone like you asked I'd say I'll read your stories and you read mine so we get a feel for each others style and ideas.

4491952 Oh, gotcha, I thought they actually changed it, well with that new intel I will use it.

Huh... that was an... intresting read. :applejackunsure:

Stuff getting divebombed full of unnecessary hate and dislikes? I know how you feel.

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