(6/6/2014 UPDATE): As progress in the story is coming along good it faded out of the description, here is the more accurate version: LT. ThunderShock goes to a meeting to see Princess Twilight and her friends, but when Twilight sees him, it restarts an old crush from a few years ago. Also, the Lieutenant notices a much more adult and mature Twilight, making him feel something he hasn't in a while, love. Also we learn about Thunder's daughter, who it is might shock you. Note: The title Thunder At Twilight, meaning a storm in between dusk and dawn.
Chapters (5)
The holy fuck does that title mean?
It's in the description, but if you're to lazy to read it it's Serbian (Not Russian) for Thunder At Twilight, meaning a storm in between dusk and dawn. 57.1% of my stories titles are in an alternate language.
Don't expect this fic to be popular...
4484224 I don't really, I just post this for my entertainment and if anyone wants to read it that's cool, but I don't care about popularity, I go for quality and personal preference. Thanks for the comment though.
4484263 just a litle advice , when you reply to someone click on the little Arrow on the right corner of her or his comment , so that person is going to be notified that you replied
4484439 I knew that, it slipped my mind though.
4484452 oh my bad then sorry about that
4484455 No I would have completely forgoten if you hadn't reminded me
4484125 Thank you. I am indeed very, very lazy.
4484589 Note i did not mean for it to be rude, I meant that I was lazy to write it in the first place so I see why you wouldn't want to read it.
4484593 Wasn't implying you were. I was just saying, I am awful lazy, and dived right to the story. Oh, and Not-So-Protip: Alicorns are clichéd to all fuck. Especially the 'humble, always bowed to' Alicorns. I will admit, if used right, Alicorns can be perfected. Introducing one from the get-go will often deter readers from understanding the plot. Or, he's just a tall ass pony, and I'm just blowin' smoke.
4484619 I knew you weren't, but I just wanted to be sure. As for Alicorn OCs, I'm trying to convince people that not all of them completely suck d***, as for Thunder, he's basically me if I was a pony (Never thought I'd see that in the same sentence). I would always do first-person stories that are not on here so it became sort of a habit. Short explanation short, I'm working at not only getting myself to write with Alicorns better, but hopefully others as well. Plus in regards to the "or he's tall as fuck" comment if these ponies were real with Celestia being approximately 6' 1" up to 6' 4" I would still be taller than her by about 2 inches, if she was 6' 4", I'm about 6' 6" so again I tried to add a chunk of realism in to it. As for the series in a whole, there was a backstory to it, but it sucked so bad I wanted to throw up. And I know some people look for well-written Alicorn OC/Princess stories, they're hard to find, so I thought I'd help.
4484645 Self inserts are also looked down upon, for some fucking reason. But, most of the time, people aren't really game. And, try to draw readers in with the first chapter or two, then show he's an alicorn.
4484653 I see exactly where you are coming from and had deeply considered it, but in the end, honestly this is mostly for me to enjoy writing than for actual popularity. More or less, I do what I want, if people like it great, if not I don't care. That's the way everyone should be, but there's always that 'manestream' person out there who gets pissy over one little story. And with the few chapters then say he's an Alicorn thing I have no idea how many chapters there will be, there might only be two, there might be 37, I have no idea, plus that would boring as Hell for me to write, personally anyway.
4484664 That's the spirit! Do what pleases yourself! Well, that sounds a bit wrong, but...whatever.
4484667 Trust me, I do
for instance, ever hear the name Flutterape? If so I'm the one who came up with it. All in all, perform intercourse with scantly clad women, obtain currency 
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4484674 Damn right!
Hold on...who the fuck had a search and seize warrant for your computer?
4484683 I do, but where'd you learn that? Any way I got a truancy ticket and with a past of depression and the fact I collect militaria they were concerned so they took me to the ER, I told them I was a fan of MLP, one of the officers had heard about that, but the R34 portion, so long story short they confiscated it because they thought I had pony porn on there, I do, but what are they going to do about it?
To be far, I stupidly authorized it, but I give zero fucks. 
4484683 Oh wait, I put that in the other stories. Derp moment.
4484697 Just making sure you weren't going to kill me the minute I close my eyes.
4484703 No promises
. Just remember, Flutterape, think about it, you're hanging out with Fluttershy then all of a sudden you're out cold, only to wake up tied to a bed and you see Fluttershy walk towards you and jump on you, f***ing you sensless. *sniff* *sniff* I smell a clopfic coming on. 
I like the story man its good so far, hope you bring the next chapter out soon