and let's not forget that rainbows not making a serious effort to be more open about her feelings, which i'm sure will come back to bite everyone in the ass later. add that with the fact that twilight's not allowing herself to push dash to do her part of the plan, and you have yet another recipe for disaster. i feel so sorry for cadance.
Poor Rainbow... her dreams go up in flames, but it's understandable she'd want to be their for her and Twilights child. Gonna be interesting to see what'll happen for the couple next. Until next time.
All of a sudden, Cadence’s expression turned mischievous. “Oh! Or do you want to be on the receiving end for a change?” she asked, making Shining Armor’s eyes go wide while the mare’s teeth showed in an almost hungry grin. “I have to admit, Twilight’s description of how much she enjoys being with Rainbow like that has got me a bit curious. And it would be an amazing benefit to our relationship if we could…walk in each others horseshoes for a little while.”
“C-Cadence?” Shining Armor stuttered in a squeaky voice.
at this my reaction was
However, i feel dash could still be captain. Like twi said, the second in command could handle most of the stuff while dash was pregnant and could even still deal with 50% of the work after. Dash could even reinvent the wonderbolts, since it's now starting with a completely clean slate.
Well that was a pretty heart-wrenching ending to the chapter. I hope they figure out a way to let Rainbow Dash achieve her dreams, even if only in a somewhat altered state, before this story ends. Perhaps she could start her own stunt flying group without all the military service. And they could spend most of the year training in the same location so they don't have to be far from their families, and when they do travel to do shows it's a short duration and they can bring their families with.
As for the first part of this chapter: Hoo boy, Twilight has issues. She desperately needs a psychologist. Maybe a team of psychologists.
Anypony else want to call us wrong? Freaks? Want to tell us how we need to be banished from Equestria before we completely destroy the foundation of all pony society with our outlandish and non-traditional romance? WELL?”
Me. They should be sterilized and cured. Damn, this gayfics becomes more and more random.
I love Spike's outburst and reaction, epically hilarious. The same for Shining's counter to Rainbow over she and Twilight's talking about doing it.
But damn man I agree with what some of the previous comments, BOTH Twilight and Rainbow are gonna need therapists to deal with their issues, along with some pot at some point. And let's not forget about poor little Spike.
That was great But I do think both are going to need some professional help and I know Cadence is close to that but I think they need a specialist I WANT MOAR SOON If that is alright with you
A lesson learned from her doll, and Twilight had been back at the overreaction to the events in her life when a future version of herself appeared in her library a few weeks later.
I like this line. It shows the episodes are not in order of occurrence and/or take place less than a week in between adventures. Winter wrap Up aired, two weeks later it was Fall Weather Friends, and Applebloom did not age an entire year.
Rainbow would leave. She would take their foal with her. All of Twilight’s friends would abandon her. And then she would be left alone in her badly named Castle of Friendship as madness overtook her and Princess Celestia was forced to banish her to the sun! Only, she wouldn’t be able to! Because Twilight was afraid that as the Element of Magic, she could probably defeat Celestia in a fight! And then Equestria would fall under the rule of the evil Tyrant Sparkle!
You are missing the floods, disease, famine and unearthly. unholy insects that bite people but don't allow them to die.
She had treated Rainbow horribly, proper example or no.
About as well as Celestia treats her sister, so she does have an example.
While, if Rainbow started having doubts about explain how Twilight was in fact the father of their foal, they could simply say Dash had been knocked up by stallion that didn’t stick around,
Lying is only going to make things worse.
She was carrying the stallion’s granddaughter around after all. They would have to tell him some time.
Tell her that.
While the two of them had ended up with Rainbow after the divorce, she didn’t feel all that much closer to her mother than her father.
What. Happened?
A BIG THING! AND HE SAID HE LIKED HAVING SEX WITH RAINBOW DASH! AS. A. STALLION!”
4chan will answer why Twilight liked it so much. Just ask them, and bring a picture of Rainbow bending over.
And doing it over, and Over, and OVER AGAIN! SO...ANYPONY GOT A PROBLEM WITH THAT?”
Not me.
“You and Twilight doing it like wild animals, with her as a him pounding you like a jackhammer aaaaaaaaaaaaaaallll night and into the live long day does make you happy, right Dashie?”
Dash, I got two quarts of Brain Bleach just for you. On the house.
I’m the only party pony in a town with over three hundred and sixty-five ponies,
Many ponies refuse to accept her services for a few reasons.
“All that guard training? Mmmm, you’d be quite the little morsel. With the way Twilight goes on about how much she likes to be with Rainbow, I can’t help but want to try it out.”
I think she's the Princess of Obsession and Lust rather than Love.
Rainbow couldn’t let him go on anymore. “Are you kidding me?”
I don't know what it is, but I have lost so much interest in this by now. Maybe it's all the drama that I would have handled differently. I will keep following this, at least for the next chapter, not sure what's changed. Maybe it's more drama than comedy. Hope the next one coms out sooner.
and so the psycology begins to flip as rainbow intern becomes somewhat abusively in contorl though not to the level twilight was and twilight begins to brake down from fear, though in this case fear of herself.
"I mean, with Rainbow meeting her female parent and Twilight constantly beating herself up as not to fall back into her way too overboard control-freak ways, what could possibly go wrong for the couple now?"
*snorts with laughter*
Of course the author of the story, with the ability to bring Murphy into play, would ask that. You have something devious in mind, don't you?
So, important note. That was 'by order of Celestia' - not 'invited to.' Celestia can decline the declining and explain to Rainbow Dash that she needs her to *find* the ponies and to establish the traditions the Wonderbolts *should* have - having Dash actually be a flight leader can wait. If she wants to make Ponyville the new Wonderbolts headquarters, so she can live at home, and only go out for special shows, rather than regular patrols, that would be entirely possible. Having the head of the entire organization going out on patrols and leading every show is probably a bad idea anyhow; there's a reason generals don't lead cavalry charges anymore, things like that.
You know... she might not be able to *fly* with the Wonderbolts as Captain, but trainer? Other form of involvement? There's a lot of potential there.....
5395197 That's implying she would ever want to be a trainer... She's kinda worked her whole life training to be a flyer from what we know, and she's too bullheaded to see any other alternative once that's off the table... I think she'd be content being there with Twilight.
So... When's the next chapter? S.A.I.A. is getting a bit restless now that I've stopped reading to her. Probably shouldn't have made her like stories so much... I might go rewrite her code a little.
I'm curious... what happened to the old Wonderbolts? They should still be around, Spitfire, Soarin and others are still alive and well right? Why would she be immediately boosted to Captain and instructed to rebuild the corps?
The premise for this story is weird, but Cadence’s couples counseling and TwiDash’s ensuing reconciliation both felt quite real. Your little clopfic has something to teach us about relationships.
she make the wonder bolts look like saps compared to her.
and let's not forget that rainbows not making a serious effort to be more open about her feelings, which i'm sure will come back to bite everyone in the ass later. add that with the fact that twilight's not allowing herself to push dash to do her part of the plan, and you have yet another recipe for disaster. i feel so sorry for cadance.
That probably could've gone better, but then it wouldn't be as good of a story. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Poor Rainbow... her dreams go up in flames, but it's understandable she'd want to be their for her and Twilights child. Gonna be interesting to see what'll happen for the couple next. Until next time.
All of a sudden, Cadence’s expression turned mischievous. “Oh! Or do you want to be on the receiving end for a change?” she asked, making Shining Armor’s eyes go wide while the mare’s teeth showed in an almost hungry grin. “I have to admit, Twilight’s description of how much she enjoys being with Rainbow like that has got me a bit curious. And it would be an amazing benefit to our relationship if we could…walk in each others horseshoes for a little while.”
“C-Cadence?” Shining Armor stuttered in a squeaky voice.
at this my reaction was
However, i feel dash could still be captain. Like twi said, the second in command could handle most of the stuff while dash was pregnant and could even still deal with 50% of the work after. Dash could even reinvent the wonderbolts, since it's now starting with a completely clean slate.
Ah, I see that this is updating again; nice.
... Wasn't, you mean?
Well that was a pretty heart-wrenching ending to the chapter. I hope they figure out a way to let Rainbow Dash achieve her dreams, even if only in a somewhat altered state, before this story ends. Perhaps she could start her own stunt flying group without all the military service. And they could spend most of the year training in the same location so they don't have to be far from their families, and when they do travel to do shows it's a short duration and they can bring their families with.
As for the first part of this chapter: Hoo boy, Twilight has issues. She desperately needs a psychologist. Maybe a team of psychologists.
Twilight really needs some pot, man.
Me. They should be sterilized and cured. Damn, this gayfics becomes more and more random.
I love Spike's outburst and reaction, epically hilarious.
The same for Shining's counter to Rainbow over she and Twilight's talking about doing it.
But damn man I agree with what some of the previous comments, BOTH Twilight and Rainbow are gonna need therapists to deal with their issues, along with some pot at some point. And let's not forget about poor little Spike.
That was great But I do think both are going to need some professional help and I know Cadence is close to that but I think they need a specialist I WANT MOAR SOON If that is alright with you
I like this line. It shows the episodes are not in order of occurrence and/or take place less than a week in between adventures. Winter wrap Up aired, two weeks later it was Fall Weather Friends, and Applebloom did not age an entire year.
You are missing the floods, disease, famine and unearthly. unholy insects that bite people but don't allow them to die.
About as well as Celestia treats her sister, so she does have an example.
Lying is only going to make things worse.
Tell her that.
What. Happened?
4chan will answer why Twilight liked it so much. Just ask them, and bring a picture of Rainbow bending over.
Not me.
Dash, I got two quarts of Brain Bleach just for you. On the house.
Many ponies refuse to accept her services for a few reasons.
I think she's the Princess of Obsession and Lust rather than Love.
I don't know what it is, but I have lost so much interest in this by now. Maybe it's all the drama that I would have handled differently.
I will keep following this, at least for the next chapter, not sure what's changed. Maybe it's more drama than comedy. Hope the next one coms out sooner.
and so the psycology begins to flip as rainbow intern becomes somewhat abusively in contorl though not to the level twilight was and twilight begins to brake down from fear, though in this case fear of herself.
"I mean, with Rainbow meeting her female parent and Twilight constantly beating herself up as not to fall back into her way too overboard control-freak ways, what could possibly go wrong for the couple now?"
*snorts with laughter*
Of course the author of the story, with the ability to bring Murphy into play, would ask that. You have something devious in mind, don't you?
So, important note. That was 'by order of Celestia' - not 'invited to.' Celestia can decline the declining and explain to Rainbow Dash that she needs her to *find* the ponies and to establish the traditions the Wonderbolts *should* have - having Dash actually be a flight leader can wait. If she wants to make Ponyville the new Wonderbolts headquarters, so she can live at home, and only go out for special shows, rather than regular patrols, that would be entirely possible. Having the head of the entire organization going out on patrols and leading every show is probably a bad idea anyhow; there's a reason generals don't lead cavalry charges anymore, things like that.
that author's note basically tells us that things are going to go crazy at every step.
You know... she might not be able to *fly* with the Wonderbolts as Captain, but trainer? Other form of involvement? There's a lot of potential there.....
5395197 That's implying she would ever want to be a trainer... She's kinda worked her whole life training to be a flyer from what we know, and she's too bullheaded to see any other alternative once that's off the table... I think she'd be content being there with Twilight.
Then again, I haven't read the story yet. xD
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Awwwww, this is really good. When will you update again? It's so great that I can't wait for the next anymore!
Sorry if I missed a post about this, but will there be an update to this story again? It's awesome!
Are you going to update this any time soon?
So... When's the next chapter? S.A.I.A. is getting a bit restless now that I've stopped reading to her. Probably shouldn't have made her like stories so much... I might go rewrite her code a little.
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I'm curious... what happened to the old Wonderbolts? They should still be around, Spitfire, Soarin and others are still alive and well right? Why would she be immediately boosted to Captain and instructed to rebuild the corps?
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Earlier in the story it's explained but... Short version they are in prison/big trouble.
Oh, come on... saying that outside of the story is just mean.
The premise for this story is weird, but Cadence’s couples counseling and TwiDash’s ensuing reconciliation both felt quite real. Your little clopfic has something to teach us about relationships.