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O_O I LOVE THE SPIN ON THE ACTUAL STORY!!! And you're even writing almost 60 chapters!!! THIS...IS..AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait to see how the butterfly effect pans out... Or should it be the Fluttershy effect?
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Nicely
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It is amusing, but in truth I've seen similar 'spins' in fic after fic. Though to date none of them that I've read so far had the main character interacting with Big Mac other than to say 'hello' once in awhile. So far, other than Midnight using some of the dialog that canon characters would otherwise done there is little difference between them. Follow-the-story fics are for the most part dime-a-dozen regardless of the story it's following (I confess that I've done that a few for video game fics in the past), but this does NOT mean that they can't still be decent fics.
I'll approach this the same way I first did the show. I'll 'watch a few episodes' and if I like it, I'll keep going. If I don't, "Thanks for writing but it's not for me."
I don't know, hopefully you let the character intercept the story a little bit more, because right now he only feels like the 3rd wheel on the wagon.
lol, didn't think I would enjoy this one, oh how wrong I was, lets see what vegeta says. vegeta?
"its over 9,000..."
there you have it
Ughhh this is somehow gonna be a thunderlanexrainbowdash fic isn't it
Maybe make the main character interact with the others more as to more drastically change the storyline we all know.
Otherwise I'm hoping midnight Blaze become some sort of wizard with Twilight.
And obvious shipping is obvious.
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how did vegeta get out of his cage? i guess i should make it out of something more sturdy than super sandwich lesbians.
This is the point where you toss a slipper at her, yelling "its 3 am! Go to bed Luna!, or go to a Night Club and get hammered! Just bugger off!"
1 word, not 2
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Fixed, thnx for pointing that out
Why do i get the feeling this is a lie?
Pinkie trumps all!!!
Frankly she scares me a bit.
30 bits...
20?
10...?
And that is the right question!
Okay, that's just... No...
Even I don't make characters fall in love INSTANTLY; I have them play off each other, interact, get to know each other. She hasn't even said a word to him, and already she's head over hooves?
Okay, granted, she's a shut-in who's probably never been out and about for longer than she needs to, and is probably depraved as all get-out, but still.
But I'll overlook it for now, because I'm genuinely curious as to how this is all gonna go down.
Small spelling mistake in fluttershy
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Fixed, thank you
Alcoholic Pinkie party, Thinderlane swears at Rainbow and she doesn’t call him out on it, and Thunderlane tries to rush an alicorn despite chastising Rainbow for being irresponsible… lots of changes to the timeline despite MC doing relatively nothing so far. Hope it gets crazy because it’s wobbling into chaos already.