Equicide is rare in Equestria, even in a large metropolis like Manehattan, but when it does occur the detectives of the Manehattan Police Department are sent to investigate. Follow detectives Moonlight and Honeysuckle as they investigate a rash of strange murders in Manehattan. Hopefully part of a series I intend to write.
Any constructive criticism or comments are welcome. I hope you all get some enjoyment out of reading this, and much love to any fans out there.
I like it. It's very dark. I think it could be dark and fun, too. Don't forget the 'Kolchak factor': good things don't have to happen, but it can still be good, dark, cheesy fun! I hope you keep working on it.