It is the year M.38, Y.673. Civilization as we know it has ended. A constant search for new planet's to colonise is held between two opposing spacefaring factions, the NLR and the SE, but above all they want to find their home, the planet of Equestria.
Engineer 4th Class Drake Andronius, better known as Spike, serves in the Plasma Pits of the SESCS Celestia, 12 kilometers of adamantian and durasteel plate built around a positron cannon and Mass Accelerator. As the Celestia moves through the stars with her flotilla of ships, They go places they never dared to go, see things that cannot be unseen, and discover a terrible secret... One that can change the universe as they know it.
Gore- because...well... violence.
Please, constructive criticism is greatly appreciated, and I prefer that over a thumbs down.
I noticed a little hiccup in your story, and no cliffhanger.
keep up the good work
plasma/cowbell is in short supply it seems
also, in the next couple of chapters, since there is no prologue, can we get some character files?
Wow. So many dislikes - I better even out the score with a like... seriously guys; Don't just dislike the story, constructive criticism will do far more than a thumbs-down will... that plot does seem interesting, after all...
I had a plan of making a fic like this, looks like I was beaten to it.
4391669 Well...
4390846 Finally somepony who shares my philosophy.
4390846 Actually, that's a good idea. I hadn't thought of that...