Mostly just stuff I think of randomly. Long wait times for chapters due to length of chapters and life stuff. I hope you like the ride, don't forget your licorice
Tristan began his ordinary day thinking it would just be same old same old. What he didn't know was that he would be called to bring order to an unknown planet. What he knew was that he would finally be freed of a normal life.
Warning: Very Gary Stu like, my first fan-fic, and a general piece of dung
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I cannot like or dislike this story. The characters actions seem to lack weight. He has knowledge but does almost nothing really. I understand the idea of keeping the balance but even the ending removes his impact really. At the end I have to ask: what was the point of the story?
>>amiamera
I saw the ending as a mercy to the poor old soul for if it was not this way he would live forever and eventually see all he cares about die while he can do nothing to stop it lest he risk the fate of the world to a time and or general imbalance thus blowing everything up
Quite sad if you think about how restricted he truly is even with all that power.
4578698
In response to your guy's comments, my views on the entire universe thing is to not mess with it too much in this story. Messing with even one thing too much would cause a chain reaction that would change everything else. If you read my next story, that's already in the works on fanfiction, then you'll see that this mindset has now been thrown out the proverbial window.
Thanks for reading the story though. I'm not a great writer, but I aim to entertain. Any helpful criticisms are welcome.
5581821 link to sequel?